Slipknot

GrymmSong
Author: GrymmSong
Word Count: 139
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Slipknot

Perhaps these would make some fine lyrics?
unsure, but this story bubbled to the surface one night,
and I was so estatic that I didn’t get any action!! ^^

Slipknot

Everyone got laid that night,
but not I.
I tended to keep it that way..
and succeeded.

Onstage, bright lights, band plays..
Energy abound! man, woman child..
open to all ages, a full audience.
Moshpit from wall to wall.

Sticky icky filled the atmosphere..
we were all high.
Costumes, clowns, and jumpsuits,
drumsticks and water bottles!
tossed about like ragdolls.

I took from it,
like swapping spit!
I was apart of it!

Everyone got laid that night,
but not I.
I tended to keep it that way..
and succeeded.

Open the floodgates,
Mace sprayed in the face,
a riot broke out,
blood all over the place,

open wounds,
and battle scars..
a bit exagerate I am..
how all this came about.

Everyone got laid that night,
but not I.
I tended to keep it that way..
and succeeded!

  • demon

    demon

    What a picture you have just expressed GrymmSong…very haunting

    Again, this would make a top song lyrics

    Excellent

  • klezedawg

    klezedawg

    I’ve been to many a concert like you’ve just described! great work.

  • GrymmSong

    GrymmSong

    Thanks klezedawg!! ^^

  • GrymmSong

    GrymmSong

    Again Demon bless you for the kind words. ^^
    not much for lyric writing, I use to write a bunch of poetry that
    transformed into lyrics, but alas they are far from my reach, and prolly will
    never be reached again. :(

  • googa

    googa

    I bet !

  • GrymmSong

    GrymmSong

    HAHA! ^^
    well said googa!

  • Trish Cooper

    Trish Cooper

    Wonderful!!! Simply wonderful…Trish

  • GrymmSong

    GrymmSong

    One of the best concerts ever!!
    They have so much energy onstage, it’s pretty phenomenal.

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