Charismatic Man
I’m innocent, I used to say
Not anymore you’re not
You’d say, flashing me
That lascivious grin
I took care of that
Oh yes you did
And you didn’t
Disappoint
Charismatic man
You win again
I’m innocent, I used to say
Not anymore you’re not
You’d say, flashing me
That lascivious grin
I took care of that
Oh yes you did
And you didn’t
Disappoint
Charismatic man
You win again
Comments
ooohhhh la la – just love this!! What a delightful little poem with just the right amount of tantalizing inferences! Great job!
thank you, my first attempt to share something a little more racy….your comments are great confidence builders!
– greeneyedlady
i like that this is really ambiguous .. each time i read it i hear a different voice .. tone ..
oh i love this
and it has inspired me to write something of my own. thank you.
okay, cool beans, that’s what all writers hope for!!
– greeneyedlady
This was really poignant. I think in some way we all can relate to this. Really good work here. Underneath the words there’s much emotion. :]
thank you for your comment! It’s really great that you got what I was going for, that feeling of not being in control in that type of situation, and not really caring…!
– greeneyedlady
it provokes thought
well done
thanks, and thanks for looking!
– greeneyedlady
Oh this is very well-written.
“Charismatic man
You win again”
Those lines clinch it perfectly.
thank you, i’m glad it spoke to you in some way!
– greeneyedlady
When someone asked who you are and what you are. Do not lie to him or yourself – tell him you are an artist!!!
wait… if “innocent” means “without harm, either to or from,” then both are quite innocent, by your telling; congradulations ;)
ah, but it can also mean “free from guilt or sin…” in which case, Charismatic Man wins again :))
– greeneyedlady