Charismatic Man
Charismatic Man belongs to the following groups:
Blue Room, Love & Romance , Love Bullets, The Adult Group, The Sensual Word, Two Beings Group and WMGI’m innocent, I used to say
Not anymore you’re not
You’d say, flashing me
That lascivious grin
I took care of that
Oh yes you did
And you didn’t
Disappoint
Charismatic man
You win again
lianne
ooohhhh la la – just love this!! What a delightful little poem with just the right amount of tantalizing inferences! Great job!
greeneyedlady replied
thank you, my first attempt to share something a little more racy….your comments are great confidence builders!
PJ Ryan
i like that this is really ambiguous .. each time i read it i hear a different voice .. tone ..
iofthebeholder
oh i love this
iofthebeholder
and it has inspired me to write something of my own. thank you.
greeneyedlady replied
okay, cool beans, that’s what all writers hope for!!
lolowe
This was really poignant. I think in some way we all can relate to this. Really good work here. Underneath the words there’s much emotion. :]
greeneyedlady replied
thank you for your comment! It’s really great that you got what I was going for, that feeling of not being in control in that type of situation, and not really caring…!
Tomitheos
it provokes thought
well done
greeneyedlady replied
thanks, and thanks for looking!
lynauklet
Oh this is very well-written.
“Charismatic man
You win again”
Those lines clinch it perfectly.
greeneyedlady replied
thank you, i’m glad it spoke to you in some way!
bornazane 27 days ago
When someone asked who you are and what you are. Do not lie to him or yourself – tell him you are an artist!!!