I’m innocent, I used to say
Not anymore you’re not
You’d say, flashing me
That lascivious grin
I took care of that
Oh yes you did
And you didn’t
Disappoint
Charismatic man
You win again
Charismatic Man
I’m innocent, I used to say
Not anymore you’re not
You’d say, flashing me
That lascivious grin
I took care of that
Oh yes you did
And you didn’t
Disappoint
Charismatic man
You win again
lianne, 3 months ago
ooohhhh la la – just love this!! What a delightful little poem with just the right amount of tantalizing inferences! Great job!
greeneyedlady in reply to lianne’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you, my first attempt to share something a little more racy….your comments are great confidence builders!
Nicole Ryan, 2 months ago
i like that this is really ambiguous .. each time i read it i hear a different voice .. tone ..
iofthebeholder, 2 months ago
oh i love this
iofthebeholder, 2 months ago
and it has inspired me to write something of my own. thank you.
greeneyedlady in reply to iofthebeholder’s comment, 2 months ago
okay, cool beans, that’s what all writers hope for!!
lolowe, 2 months ago
This was really poignant. I think in some way we all can relate to this. Really good work here. Underneath the words there’s much emotion. :]
greeneyedlady in reply to lolowe’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you for your comment! It’s really great that you got what I was going for, that feeling of not being in control in that type of situation, and not really caring…!
Tomitheos, 2 months ago
it provokes thought
well done
greeneyedlady in reply to Tomitheos’s comment, 2 months ago
thanks, and thanks for looking!
Lindsay Nicole, 2 months ago
Oh this is very well-written.
“Charismatic man
You win again”
Those lines clinch it perfectly.
greeneyedlady in reply to Lindsay Nicole’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you, i’m glad it spoke to you in some way!