Alone is so loud when your lover leaves.
The distant tick of the clock is fainter.
Silence crashes in from every corner.
The scent of you that enticingly lingers.
Fighting my senses for the passion of color.
To recreate the reality of your sweetness.
The air you breathed stays motionless.
Suspended in time awaiting your return.
To excitingly explode stirring again.
As a summer storm brings the feeling of new life.
The fresh sweet fragrant rain stained air.
Awakening such pleasurable passions.
Erupting such sensual eroticism.
Of spring blossoms bursting with beauty.
Oh curse this silent emptiness left here.
As the warmth of cooling embers lie on my heart.
Swift and safe return to ignite my fires.
Releasing the Phoenix to rise over us.

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  • Naylor
    Naylorabout 5 years ago

    This is beautiful … filled with passion and wonderful imagery …. written with grace as usual :) ((HUG))

  • That is a lovely comment. I thank you gratefully. :) (HUGS)

    – Goldenspirit

  • bluewhite
    bluewhiteabout 5 years ago

    Lovely and warm.

  • But flames of ice chill our hands.

    – Goldenspirit

  • JaneSolomon
    JaneSolomonabout 5 years ago

    Very beautiful! xx

  • Thank you so much.

    – Goldenspirit

  • lianne
    lianneabout 5 years ago

    Absolutely gorgeous – and so filled with evocative imagery and tender thoughts.

  • All wasted. The desert is vast and stony ground in abundance. :(

    – Goldenspirit

  • Jane17
    Jane17about 5 years ago

    beautiful love poem.. silence so empty.. the ending seems a symbol of transformation, the phoenix, flying above.

  • Sadly it has been killed. :(

    – Goldenspirit

  • Hathor
    Hathorabout 5 years ago

    this is so sad, and brimming over with lost love’s tears.
    The air you breathed stays motionless.
    Suspended in time awaiting your return.


  • Thank you Kristin. Life is a bitch the good seem to attract sadness and hurt. :(

    – Goldenspirit

  • raymondoantonio
    raymondoantonioabout 5 years ago


  • Many thanks my friend. :)

    – Goldenspirit

  • Rhenastarr
    Rhenastarrabout 5 years ago

    Just beautiful!!!!!!!

  • Appreciated. :)

    – Goldenspirit

  • princessleah
    princessleahabout 5 years ago

    This is beautiful…..!

  • I,m glad you think so. I am honoured. :)

    – Goldenspirit

  • Trenchtownrock
    Trenchtownrockabout 5 years ago

    This is well done Golden one..nicely written.

  • Thank you Chris your comment honours me. I thank you once more. :)

    – Goldenspirit

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