the Tree of Death

He did awake the Goddess in me.
But like Solomon he punished me,
He bounded my hair and hang me in front of the temple
for all to see his power over me.
I couldn’t be anymore the incarnation of lust,
I couldn’t lead him into sin.
Unclothed and beautiful ,
I destroyed him for never being my lover…

  • poeticgenius

    poeticgenius

    damn short but straight to the point not many can use such a small piece and make an effect but you did a great job I commend you for that

  • GoddessLilith

    GoddessLilith

    Thank you!
    i…t is hart for me-my first language is not English, but when I hear the poem in my head, I have to write it down!

  • TheArtistMario

    TheArtistMario

    I love this… I have copied this some time ago to my computer and revisit it over and over.

  • GoddessLilith replied

    Thank you…how is the picture going, did you start painting it?

  • julianwilde

    julianwilde

    As Beautiful, as eloquent, as Zenful, as anything I have ever read or experienced. If I gather up into my arms, and press against my heart, nothing more than this from RedBubble, the journey was worth it. later, Julian

  • GoddessLilith replied

    Thank you Julian!
    Those words mean a lot to me!

  • charliethetramp

    charliethetramp

    hmm interesting you remind me of someone
    have our paths ever cossed before?
    do you exist as some one else

  • J. D. Adsit

    J. D. Adsit

    A work I will remember for its raw and tender beauty…

  • GoddessLilith replied

    Thank you!

  • -Lilith-

    -Lilith-

    Love this…

  • GoddessLilith replied

    Me too…my favorite!

  • lupa

    lupa

    beautiful powerful words

  • GoddessLilith replied

    I was back in time writing those…

  • TheWanderingBoo

    TheWanderingBoo

    incredible piece of writing, beautiful and raw

  • GoddessLilith replied

    Appretiate your comment!

  • -Lilith-

    -Lilith-

    Congratulations! Wonderful, moody piece…

  • GoddessLilith

    GoddessLilith 27 days ago

    I just noticed…Thank you!

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