Escaping Senses
from my collection A Poetess Confessed
Escaping Senses belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Bits and Pieces , Live, Love, Dream: May you have a Blessed Christmas Season , The Word Tree, Two Beings Group and WMGThe forest trees felt like my Father
Leading me away from pain
But for the breakage of my heart
I felt it more than just the same
I heard dried leaves upon the ground
And turned to see you walking away
It was such an incredulous, cold dark sound
I bore an owing – like stricken pay
I quickly hid behind the stem
I felt it was not hiding me
For certain you would hear my heart
The breeze moving my dress, you’d see
Your hands slid down into your pockets
The poignant way that giving up does
It killed me a bit, I could not have it
For you – for me- for us – because
I ran to you like death was turning
Arching my back when you spotted me fast
I thought you’d smile and come draw near me
But why are you here? was all you asked
What do you mean? Trembled off my tongue
I felt my heart drop, dragging low
You need to remember You uttered gently
And faded away without saying so
I awoke in a throbbing and tore the letter
Stuck upon my hand – our end
Bowing my head in soft remembrance
Of dreams that speak and one to mend
Trying to move in a fog of always
You linger inside this leftover time
A saga, an era, an ever after
Oh love, leave me! Without a sign
Trenchtownrock
This is a moving piece..wow the words are so captivating..holding me into the piece until the very end…the sadness speaks loudly…lovely writing..terrific ending.
myoriginalsin
Wow! I could feel those words Amy. You have created such emotion through your words in this piece xxx
loramae
“You linger inside this leftover time”...if it just were not so…you write straight to the heart :O)
Jonathan Sloat
Wow, such a sad but beautiful piece!
t-fourlee 23 days ago
How wonderful we are looked after in such a way.To be guided in dreams.Thankyou,this is beautiful.