fading in your thoughts

I feel you near, my love
Like promises stolen from
My palms as I shake the
Beatific residue
For it is not ok to be here
Within just remnants of you
No cover can hide my dithering smile
Is there insignificance in dreams
That I master
That I make on my own
In sunlight and care
Believing where I envision you
- You will soon be
Taking me far from all of this
To quench my trepidation underneath
Black skies and soothe me
In your charisma, ever more
All my clear rest waits for it
For there is no one else
Who arranges words as you
Who cascades over me in soft luster
Oh love, who understands this enigma
That I am
But you
All that brims in my sight
Is the wild field of us
Separate this lonely heat from me
As I am fading in your thoughts
I count your steps upon my lips
To tear petals, I resist
- Come shade me

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Beautiful..simply beautiful!!!!!!!! xoxoxo

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    Wow, this is awesome….beautifully written.
    Definitely my favorite part:

    For there is no one else
    Who arranges words as you
    Who cascades over me in soft luster
    Oh love, who understands this enigma
    That I am
    But you

    Very lovely poem….

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    What beautiful writing and I definitely love it very much!! xxx

  • ambient-1

    ambient-1

    Gorgeous!

  • Emmahleee

    Emmahleee

    You write with such wonderful depth and warmth
    It touches me.

  • natapee

    natapee

    gorgeous., as always. love the last line especially.

  • Larasolnishko

    Larasolnishko

    special…delicate, beautiful and pure as a crystal water

  • jamari  lior

    jamari lior

    how beautifully written!!

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