light of leaving
From My New Collection: A Poetess Confessed
light of leaving belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Live, Love, Dream: May you have a Blessed Christmas Season , Two Beings Group and WMGLasting, lasting light
Blinding me with
His cruel speech
Though it was not
The cruel
I had wished
It would be
To only make sense of my
Leaving
Distant locked doors
Resonating home
But I have no key for them
For he does not hear my words
Now that he has become a
Stranger whose lips taste
Like abandoned dusk
Should I lie with blossoms
Pressed against my chest
Should my fingertips search a
Stone, as imagined death
Sets him like a star
Far above my aching
Never to be tempting
As his foolishness
So near
Sally Omar
Awesome!!!!!!! xoxoxoxoxo
girlinthestars replied
thanx sally… as always xx
Rhenastarr
Beautiful flow to your writing. Really like this.
girlinthestars replied
hello and thank you so much, I appreciate it : )
loramae
Made my heart stir and my brows crease in empathetic thoughts… God love you!
EnlightenedOne
Your curse is your gift my dear. You could cut a man to ribbons with your words, but you could as well make him fall in love with you if you so chose—at least in my opinion/
greeneyedlady
whose lips taste
Like abandoned dusk
superb…...
Rhenastarr
Congrats on a well deserved feature.
girlinthestars replied
thank you so much, it’s so flattering… : )