heart, overtaken

girlinthestars
Author: girlinthestars
Word Count: 82
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heart, overtaken

heart, overtaken belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Live, Love, Dream: , Two Beings Group and WMG

Though you taught me
To trust your hands
I can not see them the same
Now that they are to blame
For longing in despair

And when this firefly lit summer
Dims into frozen
Gravel
You shall bear our
Matter, cold
As always, when truth
Is covered

You will view
Certainty
Balancing upon
A distant gaze
But when you
Approach her
To ask her name
She shall never be
My voice
Oh what a pity
That your choice
Will sever every

Tie

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Sad and yet so beautiful!!!!!!!! xooxoxox

  • girlinthestars replied

    thanx sally xx

  • Solar Zorra

    Solar Zorra

    Ouch…..absolute and edgy, someone in mind with this? or just your creative mind wandering? ;)

  • girlinthestars replied

    no, it’s just me reaching back in time and recreating my heartbreak.
    Thank God… if this were my reality right now i’d be too sad to post it!

  • myoriginalsin

    myoriginalsin

    For some reasons I love your poems centred around heartbreak. It’s not that I like heartbreak, but you speak about it with such raw honesty and intensity and I really love that…

  • girlinthestars replied

    thanx chantal. and that’s one of the reasons i am glad i had such heartbreak, because i know if i never experienced it, i would not be able to write about it the same. i think of my heartbreak as a part of my destiny… xx

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