kiss me crazy

girlinthestars
Author: girlinthestars
Word Count: 82
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kiss me crazy

kiss me crazy belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Everyday Life, Live, Love, Dream: , Two Beings Group and WMG

Kiss me, love
Lavish- faze me
Kiss me kiss me
Splendid crazy
Forehead
Cheekbones
Lips
And hips
Curves
That merge to
Mounds and dips
Stop to suppose
That we should meet
Go too slow
Oh cruelty sweet
Turn me any way you please
Lift my chin
Weaken knees
Pressure pleasure
Hands to waist
Tightened might
Demand to taste
Never ask
To make it last
Melting slow
Surging fast
The only mistake
Is to be lazy
Kiss me love

Love, kiss me crazy

  • carleysflux

    carleysflux

    I believe you’ve covered all the bases on where kisses can be planted. I love the way this verse reads, like building up to a crescendo. You’ve given me goosebumps!

  • girlinthestars replied

    i am hugging your comment. xx

  • EnlightenedOne

    EnlightenedOne

    You’ve just defined my entire love life my dear.

    As I was reading I felt like you’d perhaps been a fly on the wall of my last few relationships, lol.

    Beautifully done as always my friend.

  • girlinthestars replied

    well then you have some good lovin’ !

    thanx steve

    xx

  • Jboo09

    Jboo09

    This is just too cute, I really love it!!!

  • girlinthestars replied

    thanx Jenni…! love your new hair very sassy!

  • EnlightenedOne

    EnlightenedOne

    Have? No hon I’m single, therefore “had” will have to suffice for now, but thanks…

  • Friederike Alexander

    Friederike Ale...

    Very nice!!! ;-)....

  • girlinthestars replied

    thank you! ~*

  • greeneyedlady

    greeneyedlady

    oh amy this is so sensual and playful at the same time!

  • girlinthestars replied

    thanx Lisa… my favorite combo!~*

  • Nanmarie

    Nanmarie

    Good stuff!

  • girlinthestars replied

    thanx so much Nancy ~*

  • MagpieMagic

    MagpieMagic

    WOW, lovely poem. Full of gentle passion. Really, really like this!

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