The Tree
girl’s intuition – boys don’t get it ; )
The Tree belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Everyday Life, Live, Love, Dream: , Two Beings Group and WMGWe are over
We have not one more
Over to go through -
It has ended
Lying under you
As gone as the first sparkle in
Your calm eyes
As light as my head when you first
Stood in my view
I now curl in the haze of our words
When we lied side by side
Underneath that perfect tree
Where I told you
I love you more
And you told me –
We’ll see
What will happen to your hand
That fits mine so precise
Where will your firm decision of loving me go
To think twice
For a while I’ll love you still
I will!
Not because I think you’ll come back
And still love me
But just because I knew more than you
When we lied beneath that tree
EnlightenedOne
With all sincerity, this is one of the most beautiful pieces I’ve ever read.
I wish someone with such beauty and insight could ever love me.
EnlightenedOne
P.S. Some boys do get it sweetie. <—-this one does.
girlinthestars replied
thank you So very much … what an uplifting compliment… makes me smile~*
CloudChaser
Yes, it is beautiful…. I like what lies between the lines too…...xx
girlinthestars replied
thank you … i am glad you see it~* : )
FA Photography
Great writing!!! :-))...........