it comes around

girlinthestars
Author: girlinthestars
Word Count: 76
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it comes around

it comes around belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Everyday Life, Live, Love, Dream: , Two Beings Group and WMG

You fight me
Punching question marks through the day
Take off your gloves, my love
It will not end that way

Did you like it?
When I followed you home
I heard you checked your back three times -
A peculiar skill to hone

You must feel it
Solitude’s- thrash and sting
Silly boy
Getting shoved around
Inside an empty ring

Just as you asked -
I am not there

So then why love, such a fear?

  • PJ Ryan

    PJ Ryan

    ooh ! very powerful piece … so well written.

    Punching question marks through the day

    such a great line ..

  • myoriginalsin

    myoriginalsin

    Love it, I like the I heard you checked your back three times line
    Muhahaha [evil laugh]

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    I like it too. Profound deep…

  • loramae

    loramae

    Excellent Writing…I wanted to applaud :O)

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