I saw you wash us away that night
Right down the sink
With salad and wine
You chopped us to bits
Admiring her
As she stood up from her chair
You would have never imagined me there
For wasn’t I a thousand miles away
But what if I couldn’t stay?
We collapsed as the water choked us
You had absent mindedly left it on
To go and touch her
And as you were making the most of her offer
You swore you saw me there
Wind makes a kite
Of hair
A thousand miles away
But what if I couldn’t stay?
Janine Peterson, 3 months ago
Hmmmm…......what would a man in this position do? Probably good that you stayed.:)
Nicole Ryan, 3 months ago
this is such beautiful and brilliant writing A !!
I saw you wash us away that night
Right down the sink
With salad and wine
You chopped us to bits
Admiring her
As she stood up from her chair
BANG !! Killer first paragraph !!!!!!!!
Sally Omar, 3 months ago
Fantastic writing!!! Sally xxoo
Trish Cooper, 3 months ago
WOW!!!!! Simply amazing work my friend!!!!!! xoxoxoxo
iofthebeholder, 3 months ago
love the imagery in the first stanza