Your Visit

I was hanging my clothes on the line
And I saw you
The sun shining through
My white sundress and taupe sparkle socks
And then you
Right in the middle of them
Holding out your hand
I almost tripped on the clothes basket
To grab hold of it
But I stopped myself
And then smiled
Cuz it wasn’t real, of course
And it was just too perfect to ruin
So we were together once again
Until a cloud came
To take you away
I stood there alone
Thinking of my long lost glass slipper
As the earth grabbed my ankles
Dragging me down to the dandelions
And I fell asleep
Half amused
In a fabric fresh scent memory
Of you


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broken, chore, delusion, heart, heartache, line, lonely, love, sad, vision

Comments

  • Paul Rees-Jones
    Paul Rees-Jonesabout 4 years ago

    Lovely…It just flows so right…Great work.

  • Sally Omar
    Sally Omarabout 4 years ago

    Very nice!!!!!! Sally xxoo

  • Laura Redmond
    Laura Redmondabout 4 years ago

    oh thats lovely :)

  • Solar Zorra
    Solar Zorraabout 4 years ago

    You are so genuinely talented………this was as soft as a warm summers day.:)

  • mtda
    mtdaabout 4 years ago

    A very pleasant daydream… Well written

  • PJ Ryan
    PJ Ryanabout 4 years ago

    i love this !!