Awake, My Love

Author: Georgette
Word Count: 178
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Awake, My Love

Have you ever looked at your loved one when sleep and at this time fell more in love?

Awake, My Love belongs to the following groups:

! Creative Writing & Poetry !, ! ♥♥♥Love Is (Join us!)♥♥♥ !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Up & Coming Writers and WMG

Laying next to my love
Listening to your sweet sounds of sleep
Your beautiful smooth skin
Shining as light from the window hits your face
Putting me in a trance
Awakened from dreams of dance.

The pleasant smell of your manly scent
Touching you, bringing you closer to me
Wanting to feel your warmth
Golden skin shining from the light above
Filling my heart with love.

With my fingertips I touch you tenderly
From head to toe
Blowing kisses in your ear
You don’t know it’s me
As you sleep so sweetly.

Falling more in love with you
Each and everyday
Loving your gentle touch
Do you see my smile?
I whisper your name
Do you hear?
Let’s go about our way dear
Time drawing near.

A continued snore
I kissed your lips
Tasting so good
Making me want more
Let me breathe in the very substance of you
Let me adulate and adore you, too
No more dreams now
Awake, my love
Let’s celebrate the day
Go about our way
Without any delay.

KEITH R. WILL...

very nice
Georgette replied

Thanks.
Shoaib .

Let me breathe in the very substance of you
Let me adulate and adore you, too
No more dreams now
Awake, my love
Let’s celebrate the day
Go about our way
Without any delay.

this is sublime… i just fell in love with these words .. so well said
very nice work !!
Georgette replied

Thanks you. Your words mean a lot.
marieangel

beautifull lovely flowx
Georgette replied

Thank you.
Georgette

Thanks.
hsien-ku

some men are nicer asleep than awake :)

your words evoked one or two very nice memories, and i thank you for that. there is a certain kind of innocence that people acquire in sleep and lose upon waking. you describe it with elegance and precision.
Georgette replied

Thank you very much, and yes, you are right about every word. Some men are nicer asleep than awake (laughing).
Trenchtownrock

Celebration of love is over pouring in this write..so wonderfully done.
Georgette replied

Thanks. I’m glad you stopped by.
Nascha

Touching and sweet, Georgette. xx
Georgette replied

Thanks.
wingsoffire

This is magical girl, love is a beautiful thing and you expressed your love beautifully!
Georgette replied

It is a great feeling to have. If you’ve ever experienced it---It’s wonderful! Glad you enjoyed it.
happyfeet5

This is so beautiful and so true. There are no lines for me to favorite, for the whole poem is a favorite. Love it. Iris
Georgette replied

Thanks, glad you like it.
jacqleen

SIGHHHHHHHHHHH….....I miss waking up like that :))) You have made me really remember and MISS those early mornings :)) Love your writings!
Georgette replied

Thanks. I’m glad you enjoyed it. It’s good to remember being in love and waking next to your loved one. Those are days to always be cherished.
TaniaLosada

lovely feeling and great writing! love this…