Wonder Lies Sleeping 'Neath a Blanket of Light

Night as old as time. Why did everything begin with night, with the darkness?

And with the darkness, silence – as gentle and as strange as love.

Both waited, patient, for she was alone and the conversation with time was about to begin.

Her eyes were closed, to meet the night.

And with the darkness, and with the silence, solitude – the first and the last holy trinity.

Anticipation… the precious moment, the consummation, was almost here.

She stilled her breath so the only sound was the ebb and flow of her own life coursing through her.

She opened her eyes and as she gazed upwards they spoke, all at once and she heard each one speaking in its own time –

4 years
1,000 years
500 million years
15 billion years

And she replied, the matter of her as old as the stars she gazed on.

And in the distance, beneath her, under the slivered halo of the city lights, wonder lay sleeping ‘neath a blanket of light.


Geoff  Coleman - Landscapes

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  • Dawn B Davies-McIninch
    Dawn B Davies-...over 4 years ago

    just beautiful, well done

  • Russell Fry
    Russell Fryover 4 years ago

    lovely writing…. filled with imagery!

  • Douzy
    Douzyover 4 years ago

    Oh didn’t know you were a writer as well!! You should definitely pursue, this is good! (and beautifully illustrated :).

  • Geoff  Coleman - Landscapes
    Geoff Coleman...over 4 years ago

    Thanks folks for your lovely comments – much appreciated.

  • Nancy Ames
    Nancy Amesover 4 years ago

    What a great image! The city and stars like a campfire and rising sparks make me want to reach for a metaphorical marshmallow – hey, that would be a good title for something maybe… thanks for the inspiring sight and good night.

  • Thankyou for your lovely comment – I really appreciate when someone takes the time to write an extended comment. I look forward to reading your Metaphorical Marshmallow"!

    – Geoff Coleman - Landscapes

  • Solar Zorra
    Solar Zorraover 4 years ago

    Wow, intense flood of emotion. Very well written.

  • Thank Janine for your lovely words – glad you felt it.

    – Geoff Coleman - Landscapes

  • ktcam
    ktcamabout 4 years ago

    Beautiful and surreal.

  • lolowe
    lolowealmost 5 years ago

    This is really beautiful writing. You captured me with imagery and flow of your words. Really nice.

  • Thank you so much – I really appreciate you taking the trouble to comment.

    – Geoff Coleman - Landscapes

  • keet
    keetalmost 4 years ago

    wow that made my mind wonder,this is a prime example why I love poetry and writing,very well done.

  • What a lovely comment – you really made my day – thank you.

    – Geoff Coleman - Landscapes

  • Travis Easton
    Travis Eastonover 3 years ago

    perfect prose, perfect shot together astounding and moving, thanks Geoff.

  • What a brilliant comment Travis – can’t tell you how much I appreciate these words.

    – Geoff Coleman - Landscapes