A Tiny Second

funkyfacestudio
Author: funkyfacestudio
Word Count: 6
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Tangled metal,
Baby cries,
Forever changed.

A Tiny Second

untimely…............

A Tiny Second belongs to the following groups:

Six Words Only
  • StacyLee

    StacyLee, 4 months ago

    Wow that’s intense Lisa!

  • Bernd Jansons

    Bernd Jansons, 4 months ago

    You’ve packed a lot into those few words. Powerful and loaded with pain.

  • Ianphares

    Ianphares, 4 months ago

    Powerful.

  • Arnold Isbister

    Arnold Isbister, 4 months ago

    shocking….and sad in so few words

  • frogster

    frogster, 4 months ago

    Strong and sad words

  • Martin Derksema

    Martin Derksema, 4 months ago

    A complete novel full of pain, horror and sadness summarized in six carefully chosen words.

  • Michael Oubridge

    Michael Oubridge, 4 months ago

    My word Lisa that is so moving

  • funkyfacestudio

    funkyfacestudio, 4 months ago

    Thank you everyone…..................

  • LostBoy1

    LostBoy1, 4 months ago

    tragic…

  • LocoCow

    LocoCow, 4 months ago

    Ouch…....

  • Zenia Washington

    Zenia Washington, 4 months ago

    intense, i can feel the pressure of your work

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