A Tiny Second

funkyfacestudio
Author: funkyfacestudio
Word Count: 6
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A Tiny Second

untimely…............

Tangled metal,
Baby cries,
Forever changed.

  • StacyLee

    StacyLee

    Wow that’s intense Lisa!

  • Bernd Jansons

    Bernd Jansons

    You’ve packed a lot into those few words. Powerful and loaded with pain.

  • Ianphares

    Ianphares

    Powerful.

  • Arnold Isbister

    Arnold Isbister

    shocking….and sad in so few words

  • frogster

    frogster

    Strong and sad words

  • Martin Derksema

    Martin Derksema

    A complete novel full of pain, horror and sadness summarized in six carefully chosen words.

  • Michael Oubridge

    Michael Oubridge

    My word Lisa that is so moving

  • funkyfacestudio

    funkyfacestudio

    Thank you everyone…..................

  • LostBoy1

    LostBoy1

    tragic…

  • LocoCow

    LocoCow

    Ouch…....

  • Cynthia Washington

    Cynthia Washin...

    intense, i can feel the pressure of your work

  • Outdoors2

    Outdoors2

    Wow
    the sound of life and….
    very powerful words

  • funkyfacestudio replied

    Thank you so much

  • Stephen Van Tuyl

    Stephen Van Tuyl

    Few words…Speaks volumes…so tragic!

  • GeoffreyL

    GeoffreyL

    So much imagery with so few words, very thoughtful, deep and emotional. Touches and inspires. I strangely love it. Thank you.

  • wigs

    wigs

    great story… I so miss the six word group…. it inspired me to write…

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    :’( powerfully expressed …

  • funkyfacestudio replied

    Thank you ;)

  • hsien-ku

    hsien-ku

    oh
    my
    god

    the impact of 6 words.
    incredible

  • funkyfacestudio replied

    Thank you so much :)

  • cosimopiro

    cosimopiro

    Yes, 6 words…....and a million silent words thereafter.

  • Coronus

    Coronus 25 days ago

    so short! yet so profound!

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