spindling down

your web extends far along my body
ensnaring every sense and spirit.
My heart has fallen prey to your entangled mess
and i fear i cannot escape.

i am trapped in your ever sticky world
your poison flowing through my veins,
slowly melting my limbs to stone
and hardening my ever-slowing heart.

i try to escape, yet your binds are too strong
and they hold me firmly in your place.
Your words cast more lines over me
and i know i am too weak to struggle further.

you creep ever closer and i know i shouldn’t match your gaze
yet i look up, meeting your eyes, seeing my predator
and all chance of leaving this web comes undone,
for you are my world and this was our place.

who would take me in? a palpated moth with little to give
and little to say, for my words remained behind in your web.
i am damaged, i am heart-broken and your trail of string
still holds tight to my heart and i have no knife to sever it.

please release me and let my wings fly free,
let my heart rest in a cocoon of warmth.
give me a second chance, cut the chord
or at least bind it tighter
and
make this a
noble surrendering.


Fiona Christensen

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the spider ensnares his victim in a sticky web of momentary beauty and fragility before the poor moth realises its fate and merely surrenders to liquidation.

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  • diLuisa Photography
    diLuisa Photog...about 1 year ago

    this is absolutely brilliant! it captured me from the very first line,
    your web extends far along my body
    excellent work!
    ~ Luisa

  • Thank you so much Luisa for your wonderful comment, im glad you liked it! :) x

    – Fiona Christensen

  • Lorna Boyer
    Lorna Boyerabout 1 year ago

    I love this! i cant think of anything to say except, its amazing. truely inspiring! x

  • oh wow! Thank you Lorna! im honoured by your wonderful words! x

    – Fiona Christensen

  • Ushna Sardar
    Ushna Sardarabout 1 year ago

  • Thank you Ushna for the feature!!!! :D made my day!

    – Fiona Christensen

  • FHL Rev Works
    FHL Rev Works12 months ago


    Wow Strong write! There is hope, just hard to find without the right support :)

  • FHL Rev Works
    FHL Rev Works12 months ago

    Sorry wrong feature (embarrassing!)

  • haha. no worries! i know how it feels, iv done the same thing before. the perks of hosting! haha. :)

    – Fiona Christensen

  • Danica Radman - Tazzina
    Danica Radman ...12 months ago

    so so so great

  • Im honoured you dug through my writing Danica! Thank you very much for the favouritings and comments! :D

    – Fiona Christensen