dance me
we twist and turn like waves in the sea
moving and feeling, rising and fall
Until we have used up our breath
And spent our bodies
the rhythm continues on
we fall back in motion
building up heat
we are fluid, smooth, like water
we are the envy of others stares
the rhythm stops, yet we continue on
we are lost in our world
swirling and twirling, in and out
nothing else matters
but the beat in our bodies and the music in our minds.
Comments
beautifully the action weaved within this piece is great fiona…it doesn’t stick out to where thats all you notice it flows smooth with the rhythm …great job congrats!
Aw thank you so much JaNae for the feature and the wonderful comment, much appreciated!
– Fiona Christensen
love the flow of this. congrats as well.
Thank you Mark! :)
– Fiona Christensen
Thank you for the feature!
– Fiona Christensen
Cool poem Fiona, and congratulations on the features.
Dick
Thanks Dick! Sorry for the late reply!
– Fiona Christensen
beautiful poetry
Thank you!
– Fiona Christensen
wow this has such a emotive heart longing to it, says the romantic side. loving my tour through your work Fiona, feel so free, words are lacking here.. lol Impressive work :)
such a lovely comment to come across! Thank you for going through my portfolio! :) appreciate your comments and support!
– Fiona Christensen
!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D :D thanks Danica!
– Fiona Christensen