end of life as i know it...

i tried to forget what happened
and erase our moment from time
but the touch of our lips
is stuck in my mind

I like you, I love you, i hate you even more
for the contents of my heart have spilled onto the floor
and i will try to return to the path i was on
but its impossible now i know what is gone


Fiona Christensen

end of life as i know it... by

well that didn’t go as per planned

so i have fallen, unintentionally so but love and life act in very strange and untimely manners…..

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  • Soxy Fleming
    Soxy Flemingover 2 years ago

    I think we just have to keep the nice memories…even if it is a kind of torture

  • ah Soxy. so true! thank you dearest! :) x

    – Fiona Christensen

  • boswell20
    boswell20over 2 years ago

    you piece was short but utterly compelling…you’ve managed to sum up soo many senitments all people feel simply…great write :)

  • thank you JaNae! Im glad you have said that! its a terrible way to feel but at the same time, quite good?? its all so confusing, a real emotional rollercoaster. :)

    – Fiona Christensen

  • Shoaib .
    Shoaib .over 2 years ago

  • ah shoaib… :) x thanks… :)

    – Fiona Christensen

  • Ainsley Kellar Creations
    Ainsley Kellar...over 2 years ago

    AWESOME WRITE!!!

  • Thank you Ainsley!!! :)

    – Fiona Christensen

  • Fiona Christensen
    Fiona Christensenover 2 years ago

    21 Feb 2010

  • Kimberley Ellison
    Kimberley Ellisonover 2 years ago

    I love it!

  • Thank you so much Kimberley!

    – Fiona Christensen

  • ella b
    ella bover 2 years ago

    this is by far my favorite piece on the whole of red bubble,, i can relate in such a deep way to every line!!!
    AMAZING……

  • ah wow Ella b! i am trully honoured by this. thank you very very much! :) x

    – Fiona Christensen

  • bearwings
    bearwingsover 2 years ago

    nice take on not so nice feeling, good write

  • i know. it defiantly isn’t a nice feeling… thank you! :)

    – Fiona Christensen