Goodbye Apathy
cross
kiss
over
examine
tangled
string
knot for me
nor for you
but
for
us
but
passed
past
forward on….
I find
its lost
the thought….
its gone
away..
cut
ties
blazers
the works
clouds
rain
on my parade
like
tears
its the end
so what
so quick
fleeting
like a season
comes to pass
U nidentifiable
N ot
I n
T une with
Y ou
music drifts
words blend
memories fade
like crumpled
paper
pencils
books
lunch
date?
BAM…
Ok goodbye now
Comments
Interesting. Reminds me of some of my own work that I like to call improvised rhymes because I just write down whatever comes to mind (some of it doesn’t even rhyme, like this). But yeah, it can be a bit random at times – just as this piece can seem.
Thamks Matt. Thats exactly what it was, my thoughts as they ran threw my mind put down. Its starnge poem in my opinion, not my normal style but it was good to just write down my thoughts like this! They all linked but seem disconnected which was how i felt. Thank you for your thoughtful comment!
– Fiona Christensen
No problemo :)
:)
– Fiona Christensen
i liked the last line the best! very clever writing!
Thank you H-K! i think i like it best too! :) x
– Fiona Christensen
very cool
like the UNITY part too
:) great job
Ah Thanks Shoaib! :) much much much appreciated (as always! ;) )
– Fiona Christensen
Excellent writing on a period of transition…:)
Thank you so much! means alot to get a comment like this from you, much appreciated! :)
– Fiona Christensen
Congratulations – you will be featured in the VAVoom Blog 10-31-09!
Ah wow! Thank you so much!
– Fiona Christensen