Hello... Anybody on the receiving line?

speaking to you
is. like. speaking. on. a. broken. line.
I say my bit, but you. don’t. hear.
even though im. shouting. all. the. time.

i say the words they fly right past
Perhaps im not anounciating
or speaking too fast

or…

perhaps im tooooooo slooow,
And so you lose track. of what im saying,
And never, seem to know

or…

maybe you just don’t want to hear me
and ignoring me is the better choice
And so no matter how i mouth the words
You never actually listen to my voice

or…

what if you were deaf and i was dumb
And all you hear is my muted hum
And all you see is my moving lips
And all you feels is

what do you feel?

do you feel anguished as i do
Or are you sombre at being inaudible too…
Or are you content at ignoring me
And happy to leave this stagnant situation. be?

Because…

the more i wave my arms
the more you turn away
And the louder i shout
The more you say
And its a clash of words
And a clash of rhyme
And a clash of personalities
And a clash of our time….

Silence.


Fiona Christensen

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Im tired of being the telephone, now i want to be the speaker

Please listen… first… and then you are welcome to speak right over me as you have done all this time

Just because im young, doesn’t mean i don’t have an opinion too you know… i have a brain…

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Comments

  • micklyn
    micklynover 2 years ago

    fantastic excellent work, brilliantly done… I hear you! ♥

  • Thank goodness! ♥ Thank you so much Micklyn! Yeah! Means alot! :) x

    – Fiona Christensen

  • umbra
    umbraover 2 years ago

    listening is an active soul art….
    nice reminder….

  • Thank you Erich! What a lovely thoughtful comment! it defiantly is an act of the sould, its going beyond simply hearing and actually listening…

    – Fiona Christensen

  • wigs
    wigsover 2 years ago

    great writing…. cleverly written

  • Thank you so much Wigs! much appreciated! :)

    – Fiona Christensen

  • Isa Rodriguez
    Isa Rodriguezover 2 years ago

  • Thank you for the feature Isa! :)

    – Fiona Christensen

  • PapasGirl
    PapasGirlover 2 years ago

    everyone should listen..once again you’re right on

  • Ah thank you! that means so much! thank you for listening. :)

    – Fiona Christensen

  • Kirstine Dieckmann
    Kirstine Dieck...over 2 years ago

    This is amazing. You really touched me there :)

  • Thank you Kirstine! Im glad to know i touched you! :) x

    – Fiona Christensen

  • Valentina D
    Valentina Dover 2 years ago

    Very clever and perceptive writng that flows beautifully . I totally can realte to the feeling :)

  • Thank you so much! Oh dear, i wish you couldn’t relate to it as it isn’t a nice feeling! But cheers! :)

    – Fiona Christensen