Melt with me...
This was inspired by a song by Nouvelle Vague I melt with you and then later, a graffiti piece i did to do with melting together.
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Lets rest in the sun & just let be.
I want to become a puddle with you
so that we are one and not two.
I want to quench the lands with love
And then pour down from up above
giving our life and love to all
As down to this dry ground we fall.
We will be a a single soul, glistening in the light
Becoming one body of water each lovely night.
We will rush down vallies, becoming hungry falls
breaking down all our towers and walls.
So I’ll stop the world and melt with you
for now there is nothing we can’t do.
If we become one moving form
We can be our own full blown storm…
Erika .
I love this poem, I think it’s one of your best, and i love that song! I’ll stop the world and melt with you...one of my favorites actually…. :D
Fiona Christensen replied
ah wow, thanks Erika! I know, its an awesome song! love Nouvelle Vague! :)
wasy35
Really great read, puddle so we are one, great metaphor.
Fiona Christensen replied
Thank you so much!
Soxy Fleming
this is beautiful, well done
Fiona Christensen replied
Thank you! :)
JRGarland
Wonderful sentiment. Nicely written.
Fiona Christensen replied
Thank you!!! ;)
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Jordan Busson
beautiful. soulful writing.
Fiona Christensen replied
Thank you Jordan!
Alice Kent 7 days ago
I can understand this so well :) For those days where you just cant get close enough…. Just love it :)
Fiona Christensen replied 7 days ago
ah wow, thanks so much Alice! for your wonderful comment and all the favouriting, its much appreciated! :) There certainly are days when you just can’t be close enough! :)