R.I.P.

Author: fullcirclemandalas
Word Count: 116
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R.I.P.

OK – I’ve been forgiving and come from the heart, done all the love stuff and put aside my suffering…
but Anyanka (my inner vengeance demon (THANK YOU JOSS WHEDON)) has been NAGGING me to put this poem up and so I bow to her prickly little ways and here it is…
a little Coyote medicine for some LOL
and it makes me laugh
which I need :)

This writing is entirely a work of fiction. The names, characters and incidents protrayed in it are the work of the author’s imagination. Any resemblance to acutal persons,living or dead, events or localities is entirely coincidental. copyright 2009 Marg Thomson

R.I.P. belongs to the following groups:

! ♥♥All About Hearts♥♥ !, ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Artists with Disabilities, Blue Room, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Melbourne & Victoria, Pentacle Passions, Practising the Dark Arts, Reaching Freedom, The Adult Group, The Healing Journey, THE SISTERHOOD, The Word Tree, Unconventional Artistry - 3 per day, Up & Coming Writers and WMG

A sly tongued fat man
with skin of coffee
cybersexed me until,
I was dazed into believing
I was his cream
then he drank of me, his fill.

Then he crushed me like
an empty carton
and with a loveless, empty grin,
his big butt swinging
his dread hair dancing
he tried to throw me in the bin.

But I was not crushed,
tho my heart was broken.
And I was not empty,
tho promises of marriage were spoken.

And I turned from him
and his many lies,
to his empty promises
I said goodbye
and with a compassionate, loving grin at
his big butt quivering
his dread hair shivering
I threw him in the bin.

ShesALady

This is so beautifully written. Well done.
fullcirclemand... replied

Thank you so much:) Thanks for dropping by:)
tkrosevear

That should appease Anyanka quite well…blessed be sis ;) xoxox
fullcirclemand... replied

thanks my darling sister:) Anyanka is very very merry indeed – my inner vengeance demon is cackling LOL
Anne McGinn

‘his high butt quivering’ – gotta live it. HAHAHAHA now THIS is FUNNY!!!!! Well done, sister
fullcirclemand... replied

LOL Anne:)
Anne McGinn

OOPS – I mean of course gotta LOVE!!
fullcirclemand... replied

Of course darling sister:) Thank you:)
Tracey Mac

Excellent lol…..love the quivering too…..lmao…..may that butt RIP…..wonderful words and love the last line…a lot sis! :D
fullcirclemand... replied

Knew you’d love it:) Blessed be sister of my heart:)
Astoreth

LOL….excellent!! xx
fullcirclemand... replied

My pleasure Astoreth – glad it made you laugh:)
ArcadiaTempest

This is brilliant…......love it XXXX
fullcirclemand... replied

I’m glad you do:) thank you :) xoxoxo
sweetscent62

Amen : ) well written!! Wen x
fullcirclemand... replied

Thank you Wen:) Blessings to you xoxoxo
Alexanderargyll

excellent writing….........
fullcirclemand... replied

Thank you Alexander:)
Sally Omar
fullcirclemand...

omg sally – you honour me! I am so grateful – thank you so much:) may all my sisters stand strong, tall and proud and drink lots of champagne and eat lots of chocolates:) xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Wendy Slee

Touche!!!! and Bravo!
and just plain “congratulations my friend”....I love your style….
fullcirclemand... replied

Thank you my sister xoxoxox
phantomlimb

Brilliant!!!
fullcirclemand... replied

Thank you SOOO much!
Michele Randell

Your writing is brilliant Marg…...!!!!!!!
fullcirclemand... replied

Thank you beautiful sister:) xoxox
Jim Hall

I told you I’d be reading your stuff. JH
fullcirclemand... replied

LOL that you did JH! Thanks!
Shoaib .

wow i really like ur writing… hadn’t read any of it before
very awesome to read !
fullcirclemand... replied

Thanks so much Shoaib:) glad you like it:)