I.
it was nighttime,
and then it was day.
always
your eyes would lift
the morning up, like a
heavy winged thing,
like great birds
who move
the moon at night
through an oil slick
sky.
II.
it was you
i
worshipped,
because nothing else
had stirred in me
such a wild longing
for death.
i have an endless wood
inside my heart
and you were
a cigarette
sparked and falling
towards the soft
soft
earth.
Comments
really sweet,some lovely images in here.
Such a talent for word use you have :-))
beautiful. E.D.L
September 19,2011 Wonderful!

How do you make an oil slick and cigarette ash sound so appealing. Not the chronicle of death but very uplifting. We live and we learn and we move on. well done.