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like salmon for the saturated

Run your knuckles along
my spine
full of loss and falling
fish hooks for crawling
along the rivers edge
you said
too many things to forget
too many things to contain
but it makes great bait.

These scales are different now
impervious plates
swimming against your tide
like salmon for the saturated
catch me if you can.

© ryan

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  • JenniferB
    JenniferBover 5 years ago

    Clever analogy and perfectly written. :-)

  • jetsta42
    jetsta42over 5 years ago

    gorgeous, quick, slippery and slinky…just like salmon

  • aglaia b
    aglaia bover 5 years ago

    yum, i love salmon! hehe
    and they take you for a good run when you’re trying to catch one! ;-) xox

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellover 5 years ago

    awwwwww fuck that is just an awesome piece……

  • ytsumner
    ytsumnerover 5 years ago

    what a title…and then the words just keep coming…slippery little suckers. x

  • Arcadia Tempest
    Arcadia Tempestover 5 years ago

    ." slippery little suckers"……it was what popped into my head as well….I so get into verse like this….you can grind it between your teeth….and roll your tongue over it…..XX

  • lazydaze
    lazydazeover 5 years ago

    *kisses PJ and throws her back .. :))) COOL poem PJ :)))

  • Antanas
    Antanasover 5 years ago

    well done

  • Cassey
    Casseyover 5 years ago

    Great little piece.

  • tarawilson
    tarawilsonover 5 years ago

    i love the strength felt in this piece…wonderful poetry. :)

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