Harmonica
Harmonica belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Melbourne & Victoria and Up & Coming WritersHe sat underneath the whistle tree
harmonica by his side
sweet ride
thought about her
and then
swore off women
for good; again
played blue rhythm tunes
for a friend.
I can hear her in that music.
She’s everywhere he says
under the branches
in my bed
she’s in the wind
quiet now; can you hear her here?
Inspiration in the dust
I know
I must
I must
I must
play this woman away.
And he played an aching muse.
He sat there for days
until his mouth was dry
he stayed
until he could do no more
dusty rhythm and haze
he emptied his heart and he played
all of her into his tunes.
He played that woman away.
He drew her into his lungs
and blew her out into the breeze
he manipulated the chambers
of his heart
the harmonica
his needs
and he told her that he loved her
underneath the whistle tree that day
he played her words she needed
but the wind took them away
he played that woman away.
© ryan
Jessica Tremp
so many times i’ve tried to play a man away too…love this bit
‘I must
play this woman away.
And he played an aching muse.’
Lisa Jewell
Oh wow….....................
Holly Ringland
i could feel the breeze, the shade of the tree… and the sound of that tune. this is gorgeous ms ryan… delectable and gorgeous.
Wendy Slee
You are so talented…..such mastery with words….this is incredibly beautiful…..and so real…
the exit
The Harmonica can only keep em away for so long HARMONICA PLAYERS
Need their dreams too A beautiful piece of expression PJ ( ’ – ))
kamel
this is lovely
sandraellen
I LOVE THIS!!!
thankyou for sharing, magic.
sandra
Lenny36
Fantastic stuff. Some talented bubbler should set this to music. It’s got a great rhythm.
girlinthestars
love this story. perfect imagery.
aglaia b
OMG this is sooooo beautiful, just amazing. i’m going to read it again.
i must
i must
i must.
WOW ;-) xox
aglaia b
oooooh goose bumps! hehe
seriously it reads and has this rhythm exactly like he is playing that harmonica.
how do you do it? ;-) xox
Vladimir Garci...
You could feel him struggle and then get the hang of it after a while, he was just missing a crowd.
ufosIsee
Very clever writing PJ… I can’t quote one line because I loved them all… Amazing…
sticky flower
gorgeous.