Sakura

Silent transfer of
thousand letters enchanting
like the Sakura.

Sakura

One of my favorite pictures of Antoine Dagobert is Sakura

Antoine asked me to write a poem on it. The Sokura is a flower only growing in Japan. So, I had no choise but writing my first haiku.

  • Marilyn Brown

    Marilyn Brown, 9 months ago

    Beautiful words Flyboy.

  • MaryO

    MaryO, 9 months ago

    A wonderful haiku.

  • madvlad

    madvlad, 9 months ago

    quiet ponds
    still fish
    attract the nothingness
    of deep thought

  • Elaine van Dyk

    Elaine van Dyk, 9 months ago

    Beautiful words, FlyBoy…......so very apt for Antoine’s magnificent portrait.

  • Susan Grissom

    Susan Grissom, 9 months ago

    Haiku is dificult to do, you did quite good.

  • funkyfacestudio

    funkyfacestudio, 9 months ago

    Beautiful haiku Flyboy, It fits very nicely.

  • alexa70

    alexa70, 9 months ago

    Beautiful Wording Flyboy

  • Antoine Dagobert

    Antoine Dagobert, 9 months ago

    Geweldig Martin!!!

  • Martin Derksema

    Martin Derksema, 9 months ago

    Thanks a lot guys, for your generous comments on this humble first effort.

  • Rusty Woodward Gladdish

    Rusty Woodward..., 7 months ago

    Simple and unhurried! Love it. I love all things Japanese and have written a short story called The Sea of Trees (Akiogahara). It’s the famous suicide forest. It’s published in my wrtings. I’m currently writing the concluding part. I’ve written a Haiku to go with it too. I’ve travelled to a few countries but never been to Japan. Perhaps one day….............

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