The Eyes (English Version)
The Eyes (English Version) belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Live, Love, Dream: and The Eyes Have ItUnspeaking moment
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Starting Eye to Eye
Looking deep at me
Searching, sensing, deluging,downing
Putting me in dreams, caress me in kisses
Crawling me a breath, pouring me blood
Arising hope, raging strength
Suffering me in tears, delighting me in laughs
Drowning me in sorrow, flowning me in bliss
Touching all the feelings
My subconscious flying far high
Breaching thousands atmospheres
I am lost, in the untouched universe
Lonely, confused, ashamed
Holding it tight, keeping it still
All the feelings I have
Should I keep it going?
Awaken by the affair
A new wonder
Drifting me wildly
Blowing my senses
Thru all, by a solitary cause
The Eyes…..
Craig Shillington
WOW!!! :O :O I hope that didn’t lose too much in translation, that is so good!!
flowerindattic
aybe some yes, but I think this is the best I can make… I didn’t pick in literary from the Indo Version, but I just think this is the better words in Englsh.. Hope u really ike this… This is one of my best memories, and also the sad memory of mine…
photos40
Beautiful words. Lovely piece.
flowerindattic replied
Thanks alot, Wayne… This stuff that I will going to missed if you leave the bubble….
peterT
very nice
flowerindattic replied
Thanks Peter… Welcome to my portfolio…
peterT
eyes
flowerindattic replied
? Whats that mean?
peterT
you were looking into the miror while writing this piece
flowerindattic replied
You are very true, and you must know that too…
peterT
what do you mean? Know that too…