bats

flokot
Author: flokot
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bats

The bats were noisy last night,
Screeching and fighting in the big tree,
Heavily winging across the full moon.
It seemed too cliched to be true,
but there they were in my backyard.

[14-10-2008]
True story!

  • colorblind

    colorblind

    i’m glad i didn’t experience that
    lol
    but i did run across a bat sometime ago
    and wrote a poem about it
    never posted it though
    nice piece

  • flokot replied

    :-) Yes we seem to get quite a few bats here in Melbourne.

    Nice to meet you colorblind (great name, by the way!) and thanks for dropping by :-D

  • colorblind

    colorblind

    always here for encouragement specially if you have the talent like you do
    i would like to trip to your country one day it seems to be a beautiful land
    and thanks the name derives from how i feel about us as human beings
    i don’t see color i just see beautiful people…..and i don’t know why people allow color to divide them from each other ….

  • flokot replied

    Thanks so much for the compliments! :-)

    Yes, I am probably biased but I love living in Australia. It’s a huge, diverse, beautiful country. It’s a little cold down south (where we are) but then again, I’m not a hot weather person – so that suits me!

    Great philosophy, I totally agree. Colour is a stupid excuse for hatred. I am very grateful to be a part of a multicultural community that has representatives from (last I heard) around 100 different nations.

    Thanks so much for writing,
    Fi

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