Isabella

Isabella had just killed her doctor. Deliberately.

Highly illegal, out of character, and a deadly sin, she was surprised to find that it hadn’t felt too bad.

‘Not even particularly messy.’ she thought as she wiped the few blood splatters from the floor. They glistened in the morning light. Beautiful, still red with life, they bloomed like viscous Rorschachs.

Perhaps she was in shock. She looked herself in the eye in the mirror, “Well?” she asked.

“You’re free.” she thought back. A momentary tiny smile.

She studied her reflection. Taller than average and intensely clad in self-styled retro-futurism, she looked the same as usual. From her disco-shades and her silver nails to her white patent Chanel boots, she was image primed, image coated, customised and custom-fit. A soul-moulding image. No discernable shock.

So she finished clearing the office. Boxed up the doctor. And sold him as a mystery object down on Lot 41. Here she puked up the baloney and triple-barrelled pills he’d fed her, kissed her neurosis, and inhaled.

What she wanted now was a drink.


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  • deliriousgirl
    deliriousgirlabout 4 years ago

    JFC!!!!! You are stunning and amazing me with this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This is so fuckin good, it goes on my long list of thing I wish to hell I’d written!!!!!

    jen

  • clone42
    clone42about 4 years ago

    I like that

  • deliriousgirl
    deliriousgirlabout 4 years ago

    “A soul-moulding image” Fantastic!!!!

    jen

  • gosh. grinning madly. i’m stunned… thankyou. from y that makes me extra specially happy :)

    – fleur14

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS
    KEITH R. WILL...about 4 years ago

    this is wild and crazy i love it

  • deliriousgirl
    deliriousgirlabout 4 years ago

    JFC is the highest praise I can ever give!!!! Jeeeeeeeeze, grrrrrl, you gotta keep on keepin on!

    jen

  • Mister Mxyplyzyk
    Mister Mxyplyzykabout 4 years ago

    Ahhh
    3 things
    1 – Why don’t you spell and write this well when you comment
    2- Why isn’t this in Flash Fiction
    3- Very good little piece of writing

  • Digby
    Digbyabout 4 years ago

    You are a super quirky killer fleur14.

    Where have all the other fleurs gone, BTW?

  • Cathryn Swanson
    Cathryn Swansonabout 4 years ago

    Great short story fleur, I liked the unconventional beat :)

  • Be2ru
    Be2ruabout 4 years ago

    Wow…talk about vivid imagery! not only could i picture every moment…but felt like….for one brief moment in time…that i was actually her!….and oh yes…it did feel good!….I love it…very stimulating..what a amazing flow

  • Karirose
    Kariroseabout 4 years ago

    How delightful! I had a doc I would have liked to have killed….. hmmm. Makes me a bad person? Oh well! Enjoyed the read!