She drowned in a river

fleece
Author: fleece
Word Count: 180
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She drowned in a river

She drowned in a river belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical

They hurled obscenities at the sun.
Shit! Godammit!
Get the fuck out of my sky!
they demanded.
We can’t have lens flare
on national television.
Viewers have expectations.

But before they went live
someone had an idea
and at a river’s bend
tv crews from four networks
made cairns of shoes and socks
and waded knee-deep
into the shadow of the bridge.

The cameras told a perfect lie
framing from the waist up
and reporters fought the chill
telling half-truths about a mourning town
while sifting fine river silt
playfully
between their toes.

Then each act was played out
rushed
so it could be over.
Locals filed by the grave
and buried it
under roses and lilies
as if the marble needed comforting.

And later
years probably
the river took still-morning visitors
under that same bridge
to wash unspoken questions
somewhere downstream
unanswered.

But don’t think the river doesn’t care.
Pebbles will feel the lack
in their own good time.
Trees will lean towards each other
at the speed of seasons
branch touching branch
united in grief.

  • kathleen

    kathleen

    applause... poems are ok too, definately… thank you so much, glad the river of creativity began flowing for you again… I hope there are more of these…

  • hatefueled

    hatefueled

    wow! great work! i loved the line ‘as if the marble needed comforting’ and mostly the last verse. wonderful piece.

  • Damian

    Damian

    Cool Fleece, very visual. And well done to Kathleen to throw down the challenge.

  • pinkelephant

    pinkelephant

    I’d love it for the first stanza alone! Great commentary on the often coldly opportunistic media. Interesting line breaks.

  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van Alkemade

    Fantastic interpretation. Nicely crafted.

  • Helene Kippert

    Helene Kippert

    A great piece of poetry – well done!

  • kseriphyn

    kseriphyn

    Great stuff Fleece!

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German

    those last 7 lines – stunning!!!!

    this is lovely

    Suzanne
    Group Moderator

    And welcome to the Group!!!!!

  • Wendy  Slee

    Wendy Slee

    beautiful expression, heartfelt imagery….

  • Flic Manning

    Flic Manning

    So wonderful! Wow.

  • anya

    anya

    i love this fleece. Consider it favourited.

  • Naia

    Naia 16 days ago

    need the polaroids

    ouch and good

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