fleece this is great. you paint a picture so tangible.image of heads twisting & eyes bulging is a cracker.
Realistic imagery. Nicely done.
Wonderful work ……
LOVE,LOVE,LOVE!!! I can envision the day in my mind. Thank you so muchfor sharing this. I write poetry (I think) lol, never tried more -of a story format—You have inspired me too try. I have added you tomy watchlist. Thanks againTrish
Brilliant style and voice. This is an exceptional piece that stands in this Bubbleworld. You are not “just some guy”. You are a very talented writer.
OKso I’m slow… I thought you were on my watchlistYes this is really goodDuhwouldn’t expect anything lessIt’s taken me awhile to accept some people can write short stories other than mine that I like.I thank Dave Curtain , Mr Khan and you – Fleece (and the other ones) for thatI read your stuff and I know I have so far too go to catch up.
Great to read this again; still love it.
Brilliant. You set the scene and the mood so very well and so accurately.
I can just imagine this going on in one of those folk dancing sessions. Pretty good read.
This is fabulous. Not at all surprised it was published!
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