Preminition

I once saw a future with no hope
but not through lens, nor glass, nor scope
And as I saw I did take note
As many eggs would loose their yolk

How fragle is the form of man
Yet how tall and strong do we stand
Moving though time without a plan
Thats how we fail over and over again

Although with one we loose our way
For some of us are lead astray
simple pawns in a game they play
Life’s lessons are thought day by day


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  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS
    KEITH R. WILL...over 2 years ago

    so true

  • Trenchtownrock
    Trenchtownrockover 2 years ago

    Preach..you really did this lovely..nice work.

  • Christie  Moses
    Christie Mosesover 2 years ago

    A lot of truth in these words. Terrific write xxo

  • umbra
    umbraover 2 years ago

    well done indeed……

  • Georgette
    Georgetteover 2 years ago

    What a lovely piece to read. I really enjoyed this.

  • poeticgenius
    poeticgeniusover 2 years ago

    truth being told I agree with Christie

  • silvercircles
    silvercirclesover 2 years ago

    Love the rhyme! Flows nicely!