Just another day

My mom can be a bit forgetful sometimes, absentminded, really. She’ll tell us to do something and then, an hour later, when she sees us done, she’ll be so proud. She really thinks we had the initiative to do it ourselves. It’s nice when allowance time comes around but sometimes, it’s not so great.

She’s also a neat freak. A real Mrs. Clean. Anything out of order, and two seconds later, it’s gone. A towel on the floor disappears. A ladder in front of the house vanishes. Yup, that’s my mom for you.

Well, the sun is just about to set. I guess I better lie down and take a nap. I wonder how long before my mom remembers she sent me up to the roof to clean the gutter.

“Jimmy? Where are you?”


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I had one in me…

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Comments

  • Matt Penfold
    Matt Penfoldalmost 3 years ago

    LOL, nice work filfil, great setup and twist.

  • That’s a very kind thing to say
    And it really has made my day
    And for doing that
    I must thank you, Matt
    A cheer for you: Hip, Hip, Hooray!

    – filfil

  • Craig Mowat
    Craig Mowatalmost 3 years ago

    A well twisted story there. And good use of the ladder. I missed it as a throw away, then bam it means everything.

  • Well, thank you ever so much for such a nice comment, Craig!

    – filfil

  • Alison Pearce
    Alison Pearcealmost 3 years ago

    Love it!!

  • Do you feel that? That is me giving you a huge hug! Thanks Alison!

    – filfil

  • Arcadia Tempest
    Arcadia Tempestalmost 3 years ago

    short sweet twist….clever you got me in this! :))

  • Smiles to you!

    – filfil

  • Mark Bateman
    Mark Batemanalmost 3 years ago

    Hey – I had to read that twice to get it! Nice twist – though where would you take a nap on the roof??

  • Well, I think that sitting on a roof for such a long time makes anything else feel pretty comfortable. I’m just glad my mom would never let any of her little girlies do that!

    – filfil

  • Jeannette Sheehy
    Jeannette Sheehyalmost 3 years ago

    Mark, you’ve never lived in a house with a flat roof? We have ‘em all over here, and they’re not fun when it’s rained or snowed a lot.
    Great story Filfil – I too missed the ladder, and then it hit me. Great twist! :)

  • Much appreciated, Jeannette. By the way, I love the way your name is spelled. So cool.

    – filfil

  • anya
    anyaalmost 3 years ago

    I like very much!

  • I’m so so glad you did, anya!

    – filfil

  • Zolton
    Zoltonalmost 3 years ago

    This is so good. I had a grandmother like that. You go to grab your drink and the glass has been washed and put away! Great writing!

  • Ha! Oh my gosh, that’s hilarious! Thanks Zolton!

    – filfil