Meaningful Conversations

The most meaningful conversations
are held inside my head.
In the safety of my mind
they take place.

I talk to me
and answer back
it’s really kind of fun.
An argument
with myself
I have never lost or won.

It maybe crazy,
A bit insane,
But I’ll do it just the same.
Because I have a friend who knows me so
And will never go away.

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Comments

  • Natella2020
    Natella2020over 6 years ago

    Nothing wrong with being a little crazy, it beefs up your creativity. Nice writing.

    Suggestions? I think the flow of this poem needs some work, it feels forced in some places. Try to make it a little more natural. But it’s your call, as the writer.

  • How do you like version 2.0?

    – filfil

  • filfil
    filfilover 6 years ago

    Thanks. I’ll see what i can do.

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