The Miniature Cat.

fesseldreg
Author: fesseldreg
Word Count: 461
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The Miniature Cat.

Illustrated poem.

The Miniature Cat. belongs to the following groups:

! Creative Writing & Poetry !, Art and Stories Made For Children and First Things

“That cat is no fun,
he just lies in the sun
and spends his time sleeping all day.
He looks so nice
and we know he likes mice
but he’s far too big to play”

“If we were taller
or he was smaller,
then his teeth would not be a danger.
A miniature cat,
imagine that,
I can’t think of anything stranger!”

Then one had a notion -
to concoct a potion
and perform a shrinking trick.
“We’ll have to take care
when we add the bat hair,
that it doesn’t make him sick!”

An infusion they made,
using flat lemonade -
and catnip, they also put in it.
They pounded and stirred
while the cat slept and purred.
It only took them a minute!

They put in the the milk,
it looked smooth as silk -
an irresistible drink.
They gave him a stroke
and the pussy awoke,
took one lap and started to shrink!

The cat was so small
that the mice did look tall,
even the young ones seemed big!
The cat, (scared was he
to be so very wee),
started dancing an Irish jig!

His skill was so fine
that each mouse stood in line
and attempted, his footwork, to copy.
Though their effort was fair,
they just couldn’t compare.
(The miniature cat thought them sloppy!)

They played so many games,
(can’t recall all their names),
Puss was amazingly nimble.
When they did ‘hide and seek’
it lasted a week,
the cat hiding under a thimble!

But after a while,
the cat lost his smile,
and the mice, they did empathise.
Pussy promised the mice
that he would still be nice,
should he be his original size!

Amid some confusion,
they made an infusion
that would make tiny pussy re-grow.
Then they said their goodbyes,
with sad tears in their eyes -
but they stayed friends forever, you know!

  • sandhill

    sandhill

    I don’t know which I love more, the poem or the artwork. Both are super! Many thanks for sharing.

  • fesseldreg replied

    Thankyou! And for favouriting it! My first illustrated poem – so really chuffed to have such nice feedback :)

  • suziart

    suziart

    YAY!!!

  • fesseldreg replied

    What a great comment! Thanks!... and for the fave :)

  • Catherine  Howell

    Catherine Howell

    OH my gosh!! This is adorable!!

  • fesseldreg replied

    Thankyou so much! :)

  • Catherine  Howell

    Catherine Howell

    Are you seling copies of this???

  • fesseldreg replied

    Heavens! Hadn’t even thought about it and haven’t the faintest idea how I’d go about that!! I’m very flattered you asked! :))

  • Catherine  Howell

    Catherine Howell

    My little grandaughter would love this:) I have written 4 poetry based children’s poems that I’d love to illustrate and make little books from them. Your work is wonderful!!

  • fesseldreg replied

    Do read this to your granddaughter if you like!
    I have just had a look at your art – fantastic! I think your style would be great for illustrations!
    Redbubble is experimenting with publishing at the moment so it’ll be interesting to see if anything comes of that. Otherwise, if I come upon any useful info, I’ll let you know.
    Thanks, Catherine, I consider your comments a great compliment! :))

  • Catherine  Howell

    Catherine Howell

    you are very welcome!!!

  • fesseldreg replied

    :))

  • RebeccaWeston

    RebeccaWeston

    This is absolutely amazing – so lovely with the pictures and the verses are fabulous – excellent work !!!! XX

  • fesseldreg replied

    Thankyou so much!....and for adding this to your favourites! :)

  • Alison Pearce

    Alison Pearce

    Simply wonderful!!!

  • fesseldreg replied

    Thankyou! :)

  • Michele Markley

    Michele Markley

    Wonderfully written!!

  • fesseldreg replied

    Thanks!! :)

  • Paul Rees-Jones

    Paul Rees-Jones

    Wonderful…art and story!

  • fesseldreg replied

    Thankyou! Haven’t done much by way of writing – I’m really pleased you like them!

  • Alison Pearce
  • fesseldreg replied

    Thank you! :)

  • Alison Pearce

    Alison Pearce

    Sorry it has taken me so long to feature your winning entry Fesseldreg. I am still getting the hang of being a host :)

  • fesseldreg replied

    No worry, I was in no hurry! You’re doing a fine job! :)

  • coppertrees

    coppertrees

    Great pick this is wonderful,congratulations

  • fesseldreg replied

    Thank you! :)

  • Michele Markley

    Michele Markley

    Congrats on the feature!!! Very well deserved. This is a great children’s poem.

  • fesseldreg replied

    Thank you very much, Michele! :)

  • Alison Pearce

    Alison Pearce

    Just wanted to let you know…YOU HAVE BEEN CHOSEN AS A FEATURED MEMBER of the Art and Stories Made for Children group!!!! Many well deserved congrats!!!

  • fesseldreg replied

    What a delightful surprise! I am most honoured, thank you! :))

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