Faolaen

Nicotine by Faolaen

Posted on November 16, 2007

smoke rising above my head in blue circles/
lazy and desperate for light/ cowering image
of death and decay/ the light wanes and I begin again

  • Simplycr

    Simplycr

    As a smoker I found the words to be extremely vivid. In my mind’s eye I could actually see the smoke, and as I continued to read the tug I begin to feel at the corners of my heart made death and decay very real. Awesome work!!!

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