Reveal
Just something I had to pen down while I was very sleepy one night…
Reveal belongs to the following groups:
Graphic Scratch, The Passion of Couples, Up & Coming Writers and WMGAre you the rising sun or that disappearing moon?
Are you whistling in the winds or hustling in the storms?
Are you in the stars or the mist on the pars?
I can feel you but I can’t see you
I can hear you but I can’t touch you
Come to me, reveal thyself
For we are meant to be.
janniev
Very beautiful – simple but oh so eloquent, Faizan.
Stacey Yount
This brought tears to my eyes! Truly moved me! Beautiful!
Tania Rose
i am meant to be…in bed :)
nice poem, Faiz :)
jenseyes
very nice
Kathleen Stephens
Beautifully written, Faizan :)
Amber Elizabet...
Powerful and Beautiful Faizan=)))
navybrat
simplicity at it’s best…...truly beautifully written from the heart!