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sweet unconditional love

we link our hands
and close our eyes;
we lay on the bed
for hours at night

cuddling and snuggling and spooning
away from the world’s moaning and groaning

the moments we spend on the couch
you on top, with our tongues attached;
just like the ones in the car
and the photobooths in the park

those ticks on the beach
with our bodies attached;
in the cold winter nights
with the full moon alight

i recall the time we first met
that first touch, that first kiss;
right there and then
i fell in love

sweet unconditional love

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  • Vulcan Spark Studios
    Vulcan Spark S...over 5 years ago

    nice romantic write

  • Thanks ;-)

    – Faizan Qureshi

  • H Maria Perry
    H Maria Perryover 5 years ago

    Love is in the air. Sweet poem.

  • Barely… but thanks! ♥

    – Faizan Qureshi

  • jenseyes
    jenseyesover 5 years ago

    Wow

  • – Faizan Qureshi

  • Hannah Fenton-Williams
    Hannah Fenton-...over 5 years ago


    This was just Featured in
    WMG

  • Ooooooh my first ever featured writing! Thanks Hannah! :)

    – Faizan Qureshi

  • David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)
    David A. Everi...over 5 years ago

    Hi Faizen – Great verse ……. I like the following – “i recall the time we first met that first touch, that first kiss; right there and then i fell in love” ……. Congratulations on your feature too! Well deserved.
    A fav. for me too = David :>))

  • Thanks David! :D

    – Faizan Qureshi

  • Astoreth
    Astorethover 5 years ago

    This is really beautiful. Congrats on the feature. x

  • Cheers Astoreth… ♥

    – Faizan Qureshi

  • MistressZombie
    MistressZombieover 5 years ago

    This is absolutely beautiful and romantic.

  • Thanks MZ, it’s one of my first creative writings so that means a lot to me!

    – Faizan Qureshi

  • Erika Tirado
    Erika Tiradoover 5 years ago

    This is so romantic and sweet. Very charming poem. :)

  • Hehe yayy.. glad you like it! Thanks :D

    – Faizan Qureshi

  • MistressZombie
    MistressZombieover 5 years ago

    Your first? I am then even more impressed. And look forward to any future writings.

  • One of my firsts… Cheers :-)

    – Faizan Qureshi

  • sweetscent62
    sweetscent62over 5 years ago

    aww..This made me cry… One day I hope to have someone love me this much… Well written Faizan. : ) Wen x

  • It’s a work of fiction for me too Wen… I wish for the same. :) xx

    – Faizan Qureshi

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