sweet unconditional love
we link our hands
and close our eyes;
we lay on the bed
for hours at night
cuddling and snuggling and spooning
away from the world’s moaning and groaning
the moments we spend on the couch
you on top, with our tongues attached;
just like the ones in the car
and the photobooths in the park
those ticks on the beach
with our bodies attached;
in the cold winter nights
with the full moon alight
i recall the time we first met
that first touch, that first kiss;
right there and then
i fell in love
sweet unconditional love
Comments
nice romantic write
Thanks ;-)
– Faizan Qureshi
Love is in the air. Sweet poem.
Barely… but thanks! ♥
– Faizan Qureshi
Wow
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– Faizan Qureshi
This was just Featured in
WMG
Ooooooh my first ever featured writing! Thanks Hannah! :)
– Faizan Qureshi
Hi Faizen – Great verse ……. I like the following – “i recall the time we first met that first touch, that first kiss; right there and then i fell in love” ……. Congratulations on your feature too! Well deserved.
A fav. for me too = David :>))
Thanks David! :D
– Faizan Qureshi
This is really beautiful. Congrats on the feature. x
Cheers Astoreth… ♥
– Faizan Qureshi
This is absolutely beautiful and romantic.
Thanks MZ, it’s one of my first creative writings so that means a lot to me!
– Faizan Qureshi
This is so romantic and sweet. Very charming poem. :)
Hehe yayy.. glad you like it! Thanks :D
– Faizan Qureshi
Your first? I am then even more impressed. And look forward to any future writings.
One of my firsts… Cheers :-)
– Faizan Qureshi
aww..This made me cry… One day I hope to have someone love me this much… Well written Faizan. : ) Wen x
It’s a work of fiction for me too Wen… I wish for the same. :) xx
– Faizan Qureshi