sweet unconditional love
sweet unconditional love belongs to the following groups:
Graphic Scratch, Melbourne & Victoria, Promote Each Other, The Passion of Couples, Up & Coming Writers and WMGwe link our hands
and close our eyes;
we lay on the bed
for hours at night
cuddling and snuggling and spooning
away from the world’s moaning and groaning
the moments we spend on the couch
you on top, with our tongues attached;
just like the ones in the car
and the photobooths in the park
those ticks on the beach
with our bodies attached;
in the cold winter nights
with the full moon alight
i recall the time we first met
that first touch, that first kiss;
right there and then
i fell in love
sweet unconditional love
Vulcan Spark S...
nice romantic write
Faizan Qureshi
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Thanks ;-)
H M Bascom
Love is in the air. Sweet poem.
Faizan Qureshi
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Barely… but thanks! ♥
jenseyes
Wow
Faizan Qureshi
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♥
Hannah Fenton-...
This was just Featured in
WMG
Faizan Qureshi
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Ooooooh my first ever featured writing! Thanks Hannah! :)
silverstrummer...
Hi Faizen – Great verse ….... I like the following – “i recall the time we first met that first touch, that first kiss; right there and then i fell in love” ....... Congratulations on your feature too! Well deserved.
A fav. for me too = David :>))
Faizan Qureshi
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Thanks David! :D
Astoreth
This is really beautiful. Congrats on the feature. x
Faizan Qureshi
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Cheers Astoreth… ♥
MistressZombie
This is absolutely beautiful and romantic.
Faizan Qureshi
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Thanks MZ, it’s one of my first creative writings so that means a lot to me!
erika15
This is so romantic and sweet. Very charming poem. :)
Faizan Qureshi
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Hehe yayy.. glad you like it! Thanks :D
MistressZombie
Your first? I am then even more impressed. And look forward to any future writings.
Faizan Qureshi
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One of my firsts… Cheers :-)
sweetscent62
aww..This made me cry… One day I hope to have someone love me this much… Well written Faizan. : ) Wen x
Faizan Qureshi
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It’s a work of fiction for me too Wen… I wish for the same. :) xx
sweetscent62
Oh…what a shame! I thought for sure you must have found “the one” I tell you what…if we don’t find our “ones”by next week… we can be cyber lovers ok? LMAO.. sorry..just being silly Faizan : ) Wen xx
Faizan Qureshi
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Hahaha let’s get married!
valzart
Aww this is lovely writing sweetheART this ole hippy’s been married for 43 years ..it’s all about finding ones soulmate’ eh? ;}x happy hippy hugglez
ShadowDancer
and how sweet it is!!! love the swept-away-romance in this piece.
Stacey Yount
I love this, it is sooooo sweet and so well written and just awww! Yea F!
butchart
this is really sweet faiz….... nice writing….. sounds like it came from the heart…....b
Narcissus17
i always though unconditional love was a term used to describe affections for family members or children
Faizan Qureshi
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Well, not necessarily… I’m using it in the sense that “we love each other no matter what”.
Narcissus17
like in disney films, i know. But beyond mutual understanding, there is that legal disclaimer that, if you love someone no matter what… well they could be very mean to you.
Faizan Qureshi
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I take it that you’ve been hurt in the past?