Painful Pleasure

Faizan Qureshi
Author: Faizan QureshiAll Rounder
Word Count: 35
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Painful Pleasure

Painful Pleasure belongs to the following groups:

Graphic Scratch, The Passion of Couples, Up & Coming Writers and WMG

You please and you hurt
Bite into my neck
Make me scream

You dream and you love
Reach inside
And we decide

You are the one
The only one
Who makes me feel fuzzy inside ;)

  • Jen Cannella

    Jen Cannella

    Wonderfully written…love it!

  • Faizan QureshiAll Rounder replied

    Thanks Jen! :D

  • jenseyes

    jenseyes

    awesome…....x

  • Faizan QureshiAll Rounder replied

    Cheers Jen hehe x

  • Julie Langford

    Julie Langfordcommunity host

    This is awesome Faizan – I didn’t know you were a writer :)

  • Faizan QureshiAll Rounder replied

    I’m not… it was a creative outburst a few months ago. ;-)
    Cheers!

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  • Faizan QureshiAll Rounder replied

    Thanks :)

  • Karla Camarena

    Karla Camarena

    Nice…cute :)

  • Faizan QureshiAll Rounder replied

    Hehe I had it written for a while… showed someone and they called it cute so I decided to finally publish it. :-)
    Thanks!

  • mister khan

    mister khan

    fuzzy? must be love.

    have u ever tried slamming it in the car door?

  • Faizan QureshiAll Rounder replied

    haha there aint no love, at the moment =p

  • mimi yoon

    mimi yoon

    oooo~ this makes me feel all fuzzy inside… sweet sweet writing, faizan… : )

  • Faizan QureshiAll Rounder replied

    hehe thanks mimi xx

  • Cassey

    Cassey

    I like this very much.

  • Faizan QureshiAll Rounder replied

    Glad you like it Cassey! Thanks :)

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    ;-) very adorable. x

  • Faizan QureshiAll Rounder replied

    ...and naughty, eh? ;-) thanks! xx

  • erika15

    erika15

    haha, this is a cute poem. :)

  • JonoCarrick

    JonoCarrick

    So short but so true. I relate perfectly to these words. Brilliantly written.

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    So sensual …................ I’ve gone all wobbly!! – David :>))

  • Stacey Yount

    Stacey Yount

    Love this one too! Your poems take you inside the feeling and I love it!

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