This Voodoo Ritual

exposedbutloved
Author: exposedbutloved
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This Voodoo Ritual

ok so this is my night last night (17th Oct)
i went raving for the very first time =] it was brilliant!!!! went right up till dawn
my body was destroyed by then hahah but sooo worth it =D
i ahve to say thank you to sophie for taking me and for providing me with “sustanence” (?) lol i think thats the best word to use

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and the beat enters my body
the rymthmic hypnotism takes over

this voodoo ritual takes me and im gone
the lights transport me to another reality one where im no longer solid
floating just beyond my body watching it move with a flow i could never have

green, then
red,
yellow,
red,
purple,
blue,
green once again

flashing
pumping

my hands, which are no longer my own glow with an emerald i watch them move with fascination.
the glowing shackles round wrists pull arms like puppet strings

white masks some with their poison veins showing through stand over my body moving with a psychotic energy
but i do not fear
they are my guardians to keep the evil ones at bay while I am above

then

the beat begins to slow
the colours fade
the darkness lifts
and
once again i am my self
the ritual over
my debt to the spirits has been fulfilled
for another 4 months.

  • Ushna Sardar
  • exposedbutloved replied

    =O thank yuou sooo much =D

  • Trenchtownrock

    Trenchtownrock

    Congrats on this well done piece…looking to read you more.

  • exposedbutloved replied

    =] thanks so much for reading

  • Cassidy JK (Ra Or Emraeh)

    Cassidy JK (Ra...

    Love it. Sounds like you had lots of fun…in altered space. lol. Congratulations on your feature.

  • exposedbutloved replied

    yes tuns of fun =D lol that space where ever it may be (lol) is sooo awesome =P
    thanks for the congrats. I am very proud =]
    cant wait for the next rave i get to go to either… its ages away though new years eve

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