Marshmall0w Dreaming
Shadows don’t usually scare me as much
As do minks and moth balls
But you guided me with a gentle touch
Through those perfumed, old halls
I laughed and took off my dress
When you taught me the tango
You said you loved my marshmallow breasts
When you licked off the mango
A promise wrapped up in silk
And slightly oiled by strong drink
When I tasted your milk
You said you loved me, I think
Then we skipped through the mud of expectations
Like children in the Spring
No need for explanations
Cages are really not my thing
© evita late on 12/april/2010
Comments
I LOVE mango!!! :D
(oh, and great write btw!)
:)
slurp. it is taste of passion! thanks Lee
– evitaoz
couldn’t possibly fave this enough… each reading leaves me smiling wider… love your work evita… :-)!!
credit to you for setting the tasks!!!! thanks so much
– evitaoz
That’s cool! love the imagery!
thank you sandy. glad you ‘saw’ it.
– evitaoz
mmm! very seeable :)
;)!
– evitaoz
There is a beautiful dance in this dream. Wonderful write!
thank you for that lovely comment and for seeing it that way!
– evitaoz
I love this….it is great…thanks for sharing
what a nice comment! thank YOU for enjoying it
– evitaoz
wonderful !
many thanks May.
– evitaoz
Wow …..sorry that’s all I’ve got….this is amazing. I’m off to the Red Writing Room now to find a brain teaser..(laughing).
oops, i forgot to click reply to you directly. so here is my old thank you
yes I love the teasers. go to forums you will find writing exercises! thanks for liking it
– evitaoz
yes I love the teasers. go to forums you will find writing exercises! thanks for liking it
Compassion AND passion. Again a very stirring piece
why thank you fellow bubbler, glad you enjoyed it
– evitaoz