Dear Family and Friends,

Just a line to say I’m living,
That I am not among the dead.
Though I am getting more forgetful,
and mixed up in the head.

I got used to my pain,
to dentures I am resigned,
I can manage my bifocals,
but God I miss my mind.

For sometimes I can’t remember
When I stand at the foot of the stairs,
If I must go up for something,
or have I just come down from there?

And before the fridge so often,
my poor mind is filled with doubt,
Have I just put food away, or
Have I come to take some out?

And there are times when it is dark,
with my nightcap on my head,
I don’t know if I am retiring, or
Just getting out of bed!

So if it’s my turn to write you,
there’s no need for getting sore,
I may think that I have written,
and don’t want to be a bore.

So remember that I love you all,
and wish that you were near,
but now it’s nearly mail time,
So I must say good-bye my dear.

There I stand beside the mail box,
with face so very red.
Instead of mailing you my letter,
I have opened it instead.

  • RickF

    RickF

    Fantastic!

  • Charlene Aycoc... replied

    Rick: Thank you so much, I use to write poems all the time, but photography is my first passion.

  • Tom Broderick IPA

    Tom Broderick IPA

    great work. tom

  • Charlene Aycoc... replied

    Tom: Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, and for commenting.

  • ABPhotoArt

    ABPhotoArt

    Great humour. Well done!

  • Charlene Aycoc... replied

    Thank you so much my friend.

  • Sean Farragher

    Sean Farragher

    lol,,,,,,,well written

  • Charlene Aycoc... replied

    Thank you for leaving a comment.

  • dawndavies

    dawndavies

    absolutly perfect hehe sounds like me too hehe dawnxx

  • Charlene Aycoc... replied

    LOL I think we all get there.

  • Isa Rodriguez

    Isa Rodriguez

    what a most amazing write up ! oh dear.. I know I have been here oh so slightly.. but I know that this is the case for some.. so mind you , I cringed at some of it.. bless all our elders.. this is truly a great writing..

  • Charlene Aycoc... replied

    Thank you Isa

  • shadowlee

    shadowlee

    just brilliant

  • Charlene Aycoc... replied

    Thank you so much shadowlee.

  • Cassidy JK (Ra Or Emraeh)

    Cassidy JK (Ra...

    There I stand beside the mail box,
    with face so very red.
    Instead of mailing you my letter,
    I have opened it instead.

    Hahaha. This poem is priceless!

  • Charlene Aycoc... replied

    Thank you Cassidy

  • Janie Oliver

    Janie Oliver

    fantastic poem.

  • Charlene Aycoc... replied

    Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem and commenting.

  • gemini63

    gemini63

    I am starting to recognise some of these traits in myself scary haha
    Thank you for making me smile today
    :)))))))))))))))

  • Charlene Aycoc... replied

    gemini: lol, yep that is why I wrote it, it is how I feel a lot of times, and I am only in my late 50’s. Thank you for taking the time to read it and leaving me a comment. :)

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