Dear Family and Friends,
They say our golden years will be wonderful, I beg to differ.
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That I am not among the dead.
Though I am getting more forgetful,
and mixed up in the head.
I got used to my pain,
to dentures I am resigned,
I can manage my bifocals,
but God I miss my mind.
For sometimes I can’t remember
When I stand at the foot of the stairs,
If I must go up for something,
or have I just come down from there?
And before the fridge so often,
my poor mind is filled with doubt,
Have I just put food away, or
Have I come to take some out?
And there are times when it is dark,
with my nightcap on my head,
I don’t know if I am retiring, or
Just getting out of bed!
So if it’s my turn to write you,
there’s no need for getting sore,
I may think that I have written,
and don’t want to be a bore.
So remember that I love you all,
and wish that you were near,
but now it’s nearly mail time,
So I must say good-bye my dear.
There I stand beside the mail box,
with face so very red.
Instead of mailing you my letter,
I have opened it instead.
RickF
Fantastic!
Charlene Aycoc... replied
Rick: Thank you so much, I use to write poems all the time, but photography is my first passion.
Tom Broderick IPA
great work. tom
Charlene Aycoc... replied
Tom: Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, and for commenting.
ABPhotoArt
Great humour. Well done!
Charlene Aycoc... replied
Thank you so much my friend.
Sean Farragher
lol,,,,,,,well written
Charlene Aycoc... replied
Thank you for leaving a comment.
dawndavies
absolutly perfect hehe sounds like me too hehe dawnxx
Charlene Aycoc... replied
LOL I think we all get there.
Isa Rodriguez
what a most amazing write up ! oh dear.. I know I have been here oh so slightly.. but I know that this is the case for some.. so mind you , I cringed at some of it.. bless all our elders.. this is truly a great writing..
Charlene Aycoc... replied
Thank you Isa
shadowlee
just brilliant
Charlene Aycoc... replied
Thank you so much shadowlee.
Cassidy JK (Ra...
There I stand beside the mail box,
with face so very red.
Instead of mailing you my letter,
I have opened it instead.
Hahaha. This poem is priceless!
Charlene Aycoc... replied
Thank you Cassidy
Janie Oliver
fantastic poem.
Charlene Aycoc... replied
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem and commenting.
gemini63
I am starting to recognise some of these traits in myself scary haha
Thank you for making me smile today
:)))))))))))))))
Charlene Aycoc... replied
gemini: lol, yep that is why I wrote it, it is how I feel a lot of times, and I am only in my late 50’s. Thank you for taking the time to read it and leaving me a comment. :)