One spark in your eye could light up one thousand lanterns hanging off the trees in a forest dark with night. This you are to me –
you are my lantern in the dark, the pale rose in a desert of red, the moon with a thousand fires for a heart: the man with the light in his eyes.
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Absolutely stunning writing…I was in a forest of lanterns last night..Wow beautiful they were..but nothing compared to the spark in a loved ones eyes!!! x
How amazing! I’d love to visit a forest of lanterns someday.
Must be so magical…
Thank you for reading Amanda x
– Erika .
Gorgeous write!
the moon with a thousand fires for a heartWhat a brilliant line.Thank you so much Mark :)
– Erika .
What an absolutely sparkling bit of writing. Gorgeous.
Thank you Rikki!
I loved writing this one.
– Erika .
Brilliantly short and light of words but a lighthouse of wisdom.
Thank you Russell. What a beautiful comment from you.
– Erika .
very sweet
happy holiday!
Thank you!
A happy holiday to you too.
– Erika .
wonderful words gathered so well !@Liz
Thank you so much, Liz. You are always so kind to me.
– Erika .
Excellent writing Erika, lovely bright words bringing the light of clear seeing within your good self. the pale rose in a desert of red came over as particualrly stunning and what came over is a symbol of hope here. Very lovely writing
“a symbol of hope” – I love your interpretation dear George.
I will take that and keep it :)
– Erika .
wonderful vision and feel Erika….have missed your sensitive soul RB niece. xoxo
awww… thank you uncle Cos :)
Yes, I’ve not been entirely here lately.
I shall explain why very soon in a journal entry perhaps :)
Have missed you too.
– Erika .
o Erika
your words
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in my mind…
great work
It’s an honor, Matthew. Really.
Thank you so much for reading.
– Erika .
Very well written to rush that moment back into the hearts of lovers so that the emotions can embrace the love that is expressed magicly back this talented write, thanks for sharing it.
Hi Oscar!
So nice to see you here :D
and yes, a moment in the hearts of lovers…
Thank you, my friend.
– Erika .