I pray,
that the ship of dreams you sail on conquers the storms of the gods and the tempests of the sea: battle mighty Orion and reach the Northern Star; and all through the night I shall witness the golden victories you leave in your wake.
I’ve heard of dark legends coating the deepest of seas and myths of winged lions guarding perils of every kind. Blood-thirsty fiends and goddesses shall coat our eyes in magic spells and stand in between our destinies, but all in vain, for we know our heart’s truth is embedded into one another.
The wars and lands we’ll cross shall be many and great, and I will record my days and weave in my sadness into the loom of poetry. We’ll worship the lands of the moon and the glow of the midnight stars before they can grant us our prayers…but meanwhile, tears stain a violet hue upon my cheeks for all the love-moments stolen by Time.
And across the roaming earth, galleons of clouds swallow the dark vault of night at the summon of the goddess of dreams, and once more our souls traverse reality to ascend the lofty heights of the heavens: for it is here, our lover’s tryst, in these dreams tucked under our starlit wings where our god-cursed journey ends and our time begins despite the miles of storms in between -
we are invincible to the wrath of the gods, my Odysseus
for we know our love stands stronger than the mightiest world.
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Your gentle spirit floats beautifully through your earnest and heartfelt desire.
So lovely my darling. xxx
Lisa…thank you. Your soft words make me smile. xxxx
– Erika .
Such a soft and beauitful tale weaved with your always talented pen….
Really stunning Erika :) I completely just LOVE your descriptions.
xoxo
Christie! Thank you so much! Your words are always so kind. xoxo
– Erika .
beautiful erika, a balming read…..
(i know balming is not an official word but it works for me right now…lol)
Balming is a perfect word to describe this….sometimes I wish I could take words themselves and apply them to the most deepest of wounds and sores. Words can be such a healing….
Than you for reading Erich, it’s always so nice to see you drop by :)
– Erika .
I agree so much with Christie. It is a soft and beautiful tale. Could I borrow you pen? lol
haha! ah Iris..you can borrow my pen any time you want. ;D Thank you so much my friend. I appreciate your words xx
– Erika .
I felt I could hear you reading this for some reason as I read to myself. So dramatically as in a play. Enchanting, beautiful prayer filled with amazing imagery and filled to the brim with the most powerful emotion of all, love. Stunning. xoxoxo
ah Shar…your words are so close to the truth. I’m not surprised if you were able to “hear” my words. Truly, thank you so much. Your warm words are so appreciated. xoxo
– Erika .
A classically beautiful piece with your inimitable grace, Erika. A tale for the ages – for those who think they’ve “outgrown” the Odyssey – and so sensitively and lovingly told. You are quite a remarkable writer – one of my very favorites. xox
Oh wow Lianne, what an honor to be told this, really. It means so much, thank you always. xo
– Erika .
Absolutely beautiful…with a gentle flow!!!! Love it!!!!!!! Sally xoxoxo
Sally! Thank you so much! I have this big smile on my face now :D xoxo
– Erika .
lifetime’s journey lies behind you
it is time to dream of sleep
Your words, or rather Frost’s words reminded me of this poem: Read Here ….and yes, it could perhaps be the Iliad, so many stories can be told from one story..so many encounters and strange lands, and the journey that is love. Thank you Trwoody. I enjoy reading your comments :)
– Erika .
A beautiful prayer – very gently spoken and with profound depth of thought and feeling. Very much a work for our times consistent with the vocation of the artist. A spiritual quality to the writing. A favorite for me
aw George! your words are so intuitive! I can only thank you for them, my friend. x
– Erika .
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YAY!!! :D Thank you so much Lisa! xx
– Erika .