moon glow on miami
there was that moon glow on miami
under the bridge
her leg pressed up against his
the sound of his breath
as it slipped into her dress
it was a soft sound
she was a swan now
the air grew steadily
lifted his hand to her face
As the traffic strained
and the trains rattled overhead
a small quiet sound
rung out
from my lover’s mouth
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Comments
great imagery, evocative of a passage I read once in the Great Gatsby when he meets Daisy that one solemn night of the kiss. pg.106
ahhhh the Great Gatsby a fond classic Robert Redford nabbed my heart in the movie :)) I will have to find the passage u quote
a kiss on page 106
good title for a book :))))
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exquisite sensual words, softly restrained yet dripping with unbridled lust and passion!!!! Fantastic!!!
glad it made you hot !!! Got me going!!!
:)))))))) so glad you can hear the authentic
lust to be alive in this….
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how do you write like this – quite amazing!
I write what triggers off that impulse in me to taste
it all that desire where you are the centre of the flame
don’t we all live for that??
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ohhhhhhh PS
I’m going thru my romantic phase LOL
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love the kiss.the very deepest part of a kiss where nothing else exists. indeed Kooky Baby.beautifully written.
so glad you are in this phase… keep the great work coming!
so beautiul .. such passion ..
I was really wringing it! thanks Nicole x
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Beautifully subtle :-)
Not that I don’t appreciate raunchiness but some times
to tease is the way to please ;-)
I’m lining up for More please!