his thirst

his thirst
always first
I burst


EmptyHead

his thirst by

When I read Hemmingway’s six word story I am deeply saddened: “For sale. Baby shoes. Never worn.”

For me it involves characters. Suffering. Tragedy.

My story is less tragic but from a child’s perspective. I think our moderator is asking us to dig deep. I hope this complies.

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  • D. D.AMO
    D. D.AMOover 4 years ago

    Thanking you for the cherry having JUST finished THE SUN ALSO RISES! we do thirst for being first! wonderful wordplay u fullhead!