Burning Up

Your mouth presses against me in anticipation
Your hands quiver for a fervent fixation
Surrounding me with your longing lips
Then lighting me up with your fingertips.
Inhale me. Tease me. With your tongue.
Feel my warmth spreading down into your lungs.
The best part is watching your hunger for me grow.
Exhale now baby. Let the adrenalin flow.
I’ll be your poison, and sweet sweet addiction.
I’ll be your comfort and most craved for affliction.
So light me up. Burn me down
Watch me crumble. To the ground
Take a deep breath
Not of carbon dioxide
Intoxicate-on-me
Til your completely
Satisfied.


emmyjewel

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  • TheWanderingBoo
    TheWanderingBoo3 months ago

    beautiful and sensuous write

  • thankyou

    – emmyjewel

  • Paul Rees-Jones
    Paul Rees-Jones3 months ago

    Absolutely ravenous….wow…great write.

  • thanks i actually dont like the final line. it doesnt rhyme enough. grrr. welcome to ideas

    – emmyjewel

  • Eric  David Lough
    Eric David Lough3 months ago

    oh I will. It will be beautiful fiasco. E.D.L

  • Eric  David Lough
    Eric David Lough3 months ago

    i would leave the ending alone. it’s like a small drag…a fluttering exhale.

  • oh! i curse u. it comes so easy for u!

    – emmyjewel

  • SuperWes
    SuperWes3 months ago

    It’s nice to see you writing again

  • vampvamp
    vampvamp15 days ago