HIM & him
HIM & him belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry ! and Midnight RamblersHIS eyes numb me
but his eyes mesmerize me.
HIS touch repulses me
but his touch carresses me.
HIS love crushes me
but his love embraces me.
His need drains me
but his need inspires me.
HIS voice uneases me
but his voice soothes me.
HIS words demand of me
but his words seduce me.
HE is my husband
and he is my
distant dream.
Paul Rees-Jones
Excellent….very expressive and honest.
emmyjewel replied
thank u paul. just jotting :)
Goldenspirit
Deep. You got me thinking about that one. :)
emmyjewel replied
thank u :)
msdebbie
I like the flow of this – reminds me of a favourite word of mine dichotomy because we so often love one thing but detest another. In a personal sense, also made me ponder how somethings we might be said to love or admire about ourselves, also have the flipside (such as My creativity excites, but depression bites…) or something more elegant/eloquent than that
emmyjewel replied
that is clever msdebbie. thanks for your comments :)
gemini63
This has a wonderful flow to it very thoughtful piece :))
emmyjewel replied
thanks gemini:)
Teacup
ooh, I so get this… mine is no longer a distant dream – thank goodeness!! really like the style of this write. x
emmyjewel
thanks teacup.. and good for you for living your dream :)
RVRFNX
The structure of this poem really makes it something to behold. Great writing :)