Broken
Featured in: On Youth April 09
The Beauty Of Poetry May 09
All Around Darkness August 09
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The one who ran away
Welcome to the widening hole
Thats in her heart to stay
Welcome to the scar filled arms
The memory of what she was
Welcome to the self inflicted harm
That feels good just because
She is a fallen angel destined to fly
Broken and crazy
But too strong to cry
Catherine Howell
Your writing is beautiful:) Excellent job!
Emmahleee replied
Thanks Catherine =)
Kym Smitt
OMG i love those last few lines. Awesome
Emmahleee replied
Yes, those last few lines are actually part of a seperate poem, but I thought they fitted perfectly with this. Thanks hun =D
JonoCarrick
so beautifully written!
Emmahleee replied
Thankyou so much that means alot to me
WILLIAM DAVID ...
WOW, I LKE IT..
Emmahleee replied
Thanks so much Dave
Hannah Fenton-...
Nicely written.
Emmahleee replied
Thankyou Hannah
wells86
Well done!
Emmahleee replied
Thankyou!!
Hannah Fenton-...
This was just featured in
The beauty of poetry
Emmahleee replied
Thanks Hannah =)
Pip Gerard
This is stunning! I can’t believe you’re 16 and you wrote this. You’re incredible!! You’re obviously wise beyond your years!
It’s almost like you were feeling it! Up there with the best poetry I’ve ever read. Simple and perfect!!
Emmahleee replied
Hey Pip!
Wow what a comment!!! Thankyou so so much for saying this to me, it means the world to get a comment like this. Its so encouraging..
Thankyou once again! Im glad you like this
Joanne Bradley
You definitely have a way with words! Very poignant!
Emmahleee replied
Thankyou SO much for this comment
juddarwin
as good/effective as ‘merry go round the mulberry bush; haunting, then, heard in the plague, now there’s one many don’t see // one fast coming, some hoping a fizzoid,
juddarwin
Emmahleee replied
Oh really? WOW i never looked at it like that. thankyou
poeticgenius
strong drive mame lot of emotion behind those words !PG$ baby
Emmahleee replied
Thankyou kindly for stopping by ;D
manutdwriter
Its amazing, truly excellent
Emmahleee replied
Cheers :D
skinnyman
you speak from the heart with this, of that i’m sure :))
Emmahleee replied
Thankyou!